TinyDancer

This is really cute, and I liked the flow of events. You said you were dyslexic so you did relly well despite that! I think you could've used more imagery ...

Hey there- Gorgeous imagery and voice. You have a friendly, but authoritative tone and I loved all the examples and pictures you gave. Very personal and I can tell that ...

Wow. You never cease to amaze me with your gut-wrenching talent. Your words are real and relatable and just altogether beautiful, even though the subject you're writing about in this ...

Hey there! This is a really insightful piece. Great job if it really is your first one! I like the repeating of the question throughout. I did run into a ...

You get it. I don't know it this has any personal experience tied to it, and if it doesn't, then I'm truly impressed. I couldn't wait to read the next ...

Hey there- This is pretty compelling and I want to read more. I feel a bit in the dark, but maybe that's your intention. I really hope you continue on ...

This is beautiful in and of itself. It needs no other words of accolade, praise, or applause to convince the reader of its beauty. I read it four times before ...

This was super cute and invoked a lovely feeling of childhood naivete while at the same time, I feel as though the author is wanting the reader to see something ...

Hello, I like this a lot. Not because it's happy, but because it's thought-provoking. I was a little bit confused at some points and I had to read through the ...

Hey there! Such a sweet poem. I loved the last stanza, it really brought the poem together as a whole. It was a good summation of the previous stanzas, and ...

I like the piece as a whole, there were a few grammar mistakes though. I'm sure you can find those on your own, though ;). I agree with BlueAfrica on ...

I love to read a post that makes me think. You have definitely made me think with this one. Wow, just brilliant. I can't applaud you enough. Your style and ...

Wow, this was very nicely written. Hard hitting and to the point. I love the tone and the rhythm. The way you phrased things was unique, and thus very captivating ...

Wow, this is great! You've got such an inspiring way with words, and I love the way you switch from literal dancing to the figurative dancing of your pen. Its ...

Hey there- Me again :). Can I just say, I can't get enough of your writing? Anyway, as usual, great form and it had a wonderful flow to it too. ...