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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter One - The Result of Procrastination

    ARGH, I'M LATE. But finally here! Alrighty then, allow me to review as well! Once again, I didn't detect nitpicks, but then again, i'm reviewing you, so I didn't really ...

    Jul 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.01)

    Greetings, Buggie! Should've done this long time ago, but hey, at least I finally arrived! So... Let's do this! I. Impressions of the Shell Master! I didn't detect anything to ...

    Jul 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 1)

    This Review shall begin with: I. Impressions of the Shell Master! ^ That's my silly title, by the way. ...Huh. Well... This really isn't so bad. Not bad at all, ...

    Jul 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Black Hole Chapter 1

    Hi there, Gmu! Quite the short piece you got there, but everyone's gotta start somewhere, eh? Let's see what we've got here :D First off, a bit of nitpick: everybody ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Achilles Reborn (Edited)

    Ok, the first thing I gotta say is the confusion I felt upon reading the title of this poem and THEN reading the summary. I'm familiar with both warriors, so ...

    Jul 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Show

    Hmm. I like this piece, it seems quite unreal. I really like how everything revolves around this puppet, and the way HE seems to see the world. "Reality's a backstage" ...

    Oct 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Spirits - Prologue

    Hi Auxiira, and thanks for introducing me to this piece :) Really, I'm grateful, I mean It's not as if I HAD to read it, or anything... *flashback* "SHUT UP ...

    Apr 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Vampiria 1.Blood

    Hi there! The name's Tortwag, nice to meet you! I randomly came across your story, and so I decided to review it! First of all, I like how the title ...

    Mar 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Five

    Hey Sushi! I finally had the time to read this chapter, so let us get started on it. The first thing I'd like to talk about (and probably because it's ...

    Nov 5, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Pack - Prologue

    I just... I just love that last word. "Done". HE NAILED IT. Dang, this is so perfect, you guys make a great duo :D Anyways, this is a great piece ...

    Oct 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Chapter 1: Encounter

    Wow... I liked that! This girl seem very mysterious, and we actually still don't know her name. It is interesting to see how Sean reacts too: he seems hypnotized and ...

    Oct 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Four

    "What in Orbis? What kind of nonsensical shit is this?" Now that was funny to read! I always wondered what a god-like figure would think of what a mere human ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Three

    Another pretty bloody and interesting chapter ^_^ I was surprised that the Wind Tamer Marya appeared so soon, but at the same time thrilled by her next move. "With the ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Amethyst Night - The Secrets of Nightingale Academy - Chapter 2

    Nice chapter there! I really like how this is going. I wasn't expecting Amethyst to have that much attention however, but wow! What a blazing entrance to the magic world. ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Prophecy Ch. 3-4

    Finally I find a Fantasy story^_^ And a good one on top of that I tell you! As a dragon, Danielle has now much more personality than in her human ...

    Jun 30, 2013


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