TimmyJake

Thank you for your review! Everything you have said I completely agree with and I will work on in the future--and when I come back to edit these. I admit ...

Thanks you ever so much! Yeah, I really get what you are saying. Mix things up and show more emotion! I will work on that coming up. Thank you, yet ...

Thank you for your review, Arctic! I am soo glad you have decided to tackle this! :D

OHHHH.. kay. I have to be content with nitpicks like that. xD although I would prefer to be meaner

Your reviews are always so good, Dory. And this wasn't short. :)

I will! yay! I am excited!

hehehe *drops like*

I thought that the sphinx crumbling into dust was actually too drastic because I just assumed that it meant the thingy was dead... And I dunno if that is the ...

I actually didn't realize it was written humorish, so no, I wouldn't call it funny. Perhaps someone with a different sense of humor than my own would think it so? ...

I have it up! :D

Bella, you are amazing! :) I don't know how you found this, though, because I unpublished it--I rewrote this chapter and completely changed it around. :(

Thank you for your amazing review! OOOOH. REDUNDANCY.

Thank you for the review! :D

Hmmm... I shall play on someone's wall. hehehehehe

haha. Did she hurt it? *looks casually over to Therese* HEHE She doesn't know I am here. Chatting was lots of fun! :D I dun care how wesa chattt.... But ...