TimmyJake

I called you Alpha. wut is wrong with meee

Yus. xD heehee I dun know. You really really loveeee them. =P

O_0 O_0 O_0 O_0 I NEVER SAW THIS. This makes me feel so baaad. I completely missed this review. :/ But it is so wonderful and helps me so much ...

Your exclamation points made my page soooo wide. xD I couldn't help myself. I had to put it in a spoiler. xd

Thank youuu for this wonderful review! It is sooo helpful. :3 And you know what? Sometimes encouragement is all I need. :)

Dialogue has always been my weakest point, too. c: Continual work at it will help work the kinks out. :)

I'm happy to have helped. :D This is something that really really really needed encouragement, because this was an amazing start. If you post more, please post on my wall ...

O_0 This review. It's wonderful, Rose. gosh.

OH. It was humor? I think I didn't get it because Jay seemed to accept it as the truth. Perhaps if he didn't believe him at all? It's not clear ...

YES YES YES I love that line

LACK OF CAPITALIZATION. xd Let me laugh for a long while.... *remembers your rant*

That is very kind. c: I have been thinking about that for a while, and while I do want to make this something more, I'm not sure quite yet how ...

I just enspoilered your excitement to keep the page from being too wide. xD c:

You are so kind to me. :') And so wonderful, with your compliments. Really, you make me feel like sitting down and writing Affinity all night. heehee Yeeess, those people ...

Wow. I wasn't expecting yet another review on this. xD Thank you so much for reviewing this for me! I have been having difficulty writing this book lately, and this ...