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TimmyJake

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  • Poetry » Humor, Fanfiction Re: Birds (by Sméagol)

    Timmyjake here to write a review! First I want to tell you that J.R.R. Tolkien is my favorite author, too. Perhaps not his writing style as much as his imagination ...

    Dec 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: I'm sorry

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! Ok, this poem is really sad, just like your others. You have a way of bringing your reader in to your pain. I ...

    Dec 4, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Limit of Love <Chapter 1>

    Timmyjake here to give you a short review. I read this yesterday, thought it was great, started to give you a review, but then life got in my way. So ...

    Dec 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Lyrical Re: ... and the Water Whispers Words

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! So this is the first chapter of your finished novel? Have you attempted to have it published yet? You should! I will critique ...

    Dec 2, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: The Truth About Life--Chapter One

    Timmyjake here to give you a review. If I did everything right, this will be my tenth review in the Green room and I will be a knight soon! :) ...

    Dec 1, 2013
  • Other » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: No hands

    Timmyjake here to give you a review. One of the most difficult things to do on this website, I think, is to review poems. I am best at reviewing punctuation ...

    Dec 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology Re: The Quantum Mind: Chapter 16

    Timmyjake here to give you a review. Since I haven't read the rest of your story, I will try to stick to grammar and punctuation for my review. Just trying ...

    Dec 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Necromancer: Prologue

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! First, I just want to tell you that this is a great beginning to what will be a great book. That is evident ...

    Dec 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: My Reflection's Goodbye

    Timmyjake here to give you a short review for a short story! Ok, for this story I would like to see it a bit longer. Like why are the dead ...

    Nov 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Legend of L'Karr Stone: Rise of the Mech-Warriors (Chapter 4)

    Timmyjake here to write you a quick review. I think I will just pull out sections of writing and say what I think is wrong with it. Naomi is as ...

    Nov 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Realistic Re: The Happy Home

    Here is a review for you, Firefox! Timmyjake here, checking in! Wow, you have SO much talent. I felt so into your story while reading. Your style of writing brings ...

    Nov 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Warm as ice, chapter 1.

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! First, I love your story idea. A science fiction story is always cool. It is your idea of what the future will be ...

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Shadowed Angel (Chapter 4)

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! First I want to tell you that you are really good at suspense. You kept me on the edge of my seat throughout ...

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Spark - Ch. 2

    I was only meaning to read this cause I don't usually like fanfiction, but this one is an exception! Timmyjake here to give you a review! Firstly, I love how ...

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Other » Health, General Re: What can I do?

    I know what you're going through, but not personally. I wouldn't want to take any medications that made you feel different, and where you acted differently. It is kind of ...

    Nov 28, 2013


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