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Re: Birds (by Sméagol)
Timmyjake here to write a review! First I want to tell you that J.R.R. Tolkien is my favorite author, too. Perhaps not his writing style as much as his imagination ...
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Re: I'm sorry
Timmyjake here to give you a review! Ok, this poem is really sad, just like your others. You have a way of bringing your reader in to your pain. I ...
Dec 4, 2013 -
Re: The Limit of Love <Chapter 1>
Timmyjake here to give you a short review. I read this yesterday, thought it was great, started to give you a review, but then life got in my way. So ...
Dec 3, 2013 -
Re: ... and the Water Whispers Words
Timmyjake here to give you a review! So this is the first chapter of your finished novel? Have you attempted to have it published yet? You should! I will critique ...
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: The Truth About Life--Chapter One
Timmyjake here to give you a review. If I did everything right, this will be my tenth review in the Green room and I will be a knight soon! :) ...
Dec 1, 2013 -
Re: No hands
Timmyjake here to give you a review. One of the most difficult things to do on this website, I think, is to review poems. I am best at reviewing punctuation ...
Dec 1, 2013 -
Re: The Quantum Mind: Chapter 16
Timmyjake here to give you a review. Since I haven't read the rest of your story, I will try to stick to grammar and punctuation for my review. Just trying ...
Dec 1, 2013 -
Re: The Necromancer: Prologue
Timmyjake here to give you a review! First, I just want to tell you that this is a great beginning to what will be a great book. That is evident ...
Dec 1, 2013 -
Re: My Reflection's Goodbye
Timmyjake here to give you a short review for a short story! Ok, for this story I would like to see it a bit longer. Like why are the dead ...
Nov 30, 2013 -
Re: Legend of L'Karr Stone: Rise of the Mech-Warriors (Chapter 4)
Timmyjake here to write you a quick review. I think I will just pull out sections of writing and say what I think is wrong with it. Naomi is as ...
Nov 30, 2013 -
Re: The Happy Home
Here is a review for you, Firefox! Timmyjake here, checking in! Wow, you have SO much talent. I felt so into your story while reading. Your style of writing brings ...
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: Warm as ice, chapter 1.
Timmyjake here to give you a review! First, I love your story idea. A science fiction story is always cool. It is your idea of what the future will be ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Shadowed Angel (Chapter 4)
Timmyjake here to give you a review! First I want to tell you that you are really good at suspense. You kept me on the edge of my seat throughout ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: The Spark - Ch. 2
I was only meaning to read this cause I don't usually like fanfiction, but this one is an exception! Timmyjake here to give you a review! Firstly, I love how ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: What can I do?
I know what you're going through, but not personally. I wouldn't want to take any medications that made you feel different, and where you acted differently. It is kind of ...
Nov 28, 2013
