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TimmyJake

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  • Poetry » Humor, Fanfiction Re: Birds (by Sméagol)

    Timmyjake here to write a review! First I want to tell you that J.R.R. Tolkien is my favorite author, too. Perhaps not his writing style as much as his imagination ...

    Dec 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: I'm sorry

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! Ok, this poem is really sad, just like your others. You have a way of bringing your reader in to your pain. I ...

    Dec 4, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Limit of Love <Chapter 1>

    Timmyjake here to give you a short review. I read this yesterday, thought it was great, started to give you a review, but then life got in my way. So ...

    Dec 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Lyrical Re: ... and the Water Whispers Words

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! So this is the first chapter of your finished novel? Have you attempted to have it published yet? You should! I will critique ...

    Dec 2, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: The Truth About Life--Chapter One

    Timmyjake here to give you a review. If I did everything right, this will be my tenth review in the Green room and I will be a knight soon! :) ...

    Dec 1, 2013
  • Other » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: No hands

    Timmyjake here to give you a review. One of the most difficult things to do on this website, I think, is to review poems. I am best at reviewing punctuation ...

    Dec 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology Re: The Quantum Mind: Chapter 16

    Timmyjake here to give you a review. Since I haven't read the rest of your story, I will try to stick to grammar and punctuation for my review. Just trying ...

    Dec 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Necromancer: Prologue

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! First, I just want to tell you that this is a great beginning to what will be a great book. That is evident ...

    Dec 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: My Reflection's Goodbye

    Timmyjake here to give you a short review for a short story! Ok, for this story I would like to see it a bit longer. Like why are the dead ...

    Nov 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Legend of L'Karr Stone: Rise of the Mech-Warriors (Chapter 4)

    Timmyjake here to write you a quick review. I think I will just pull out sections of writing and say what I think is wrong with it. Naomi is as ...

    Nov 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Realistic Re: The Happy Home

    Here is a review for you, Firefox! Timmyjake here, checking in! Wow, you have SO much talent. I felt so into your story while reading. Your style of writing brings ...

    Nov 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Warm as ice, chapter 1.

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! First, I love your story idea. A science fiction story is always cool. It is your idea of what the future will be ...

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Shadowed Angel (Chapter 4)

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! First I want to tell you that you are really good at suspense. You kept me on the edge of my seat throughout ...

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Spark - Ch. 2

    I was only meaning to read this cause I don't usually like fanfiction, but this one is an exception! Timmyjake here to give you a review! Firstly, I love how ...

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Other » Health, General Re: What can I do?

    I know what you're going through, but not personally. I wouldn't want to take any medications that made you feel different, and where you acted differently. It is kind of ...

    Nov 28, 2013


You are all the colours in one, at full brightness.
— Jennifer Niven, 'All the Bright Places'