TimmyJake

Timmy here for a review!! Since I haven't read the first chapter, I will review this for punctuation and grammar, and not about things that confuse me... I would review ...

Timmy here for a quick review!! How is it that we are talking in secret(hee hee) about Neverland and that I am [strikethrough]not[/strikethrough] Captain Hook's brother, and you write this ...

Timmy here for another review!! Did I actually review the second one before the first? I thought something was wrong there.... :P It didn't seem right, but I was too ...

Timmy here for a review!! I have a distinct style of reviewing, and you haven't seen it before. So get ready for something awesome. 8) Nitpicks They played dead for ...

Timmy here for a review!! So this is really the last one now, right! xD No more that are behind a tree somewhere in your world? Nitpicks “Hey!” he heard, ...

Timmy here for a review!! Thank you for pointing this out! I would have missed out completely and never know what happened. Lets not think about that sad thought, though!:D ...

Timmy here for a review!!! I review in a very distinct way, and so I will just tell you so that you aren't confused or anything. I first state my ...

Timmy here for another review... The last one for you, unless there is a chapter I am missing... I will start off just like the others! Nitpicks They mostly expected ...

Timmy here for another review! :D I have used the same style for all of the others, so I will continue that into this review! Nitpicks The affair, coincidentally, had ...

Timmy here for a review!! I will go with my nitpicks first, and then go tell you how much I like it. :) Nitpicks Braxton snapped, scratching his bare chest, ...

Timmy here for a review! I read as I review, so I will point out my nitpicks first. :) Nitpicks Her red-brown hair swished behind her, smooth as a fox’s ...

Timmy here for another review!! I will start off with the nitpicks straight away! Nitpicks "Awaken William, Awaken." said a deep voice, booming throughout the room. ---This is the most ...

Timmy here for another review! Now I admit I am a tad confused here... Is this a book or just a compilation of one short story? Perhaps my question will ...

Timmy here for a review!! Agghhh! I submitted this review a little while ago, but it just vanished on me. Doesn't matter. I can do it over! :mrgreen: This is ...

Timmy here for a review! Wow... You really know how to make someone feel castdown and alone, don't you? :D Nitpicks Joyful life of rhymes. ---Would an A in the ...