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Re: My Heart Beats.....
Timmy here for a review!! Nitpicks An average day passes slowly by, minutes slowly melting away- seconds slowly ticking away, I know with this you are slowly building down to ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Escape From Rainbowland Chapter 2
Timmy here for a quick review! Nitpicks first So I will only point out two things here, and I think they are the two things that really shined out in ...
Apr 13, 2014 -
Re: Days of Future Pryde: Chapter One
Timmy here for a quick review!! First of all... Nitpicks First! My sarcastic darkness cannot compute this, this, happy. ---Happiness sounds more like the word you were going for, instead ...
Apr 13, 2014 -
Re: Elementárni ~ 1.1 *adjusted*
Timmy here for a brief review... Well, maybe not so brief. :P Cool comment from awesomenesishnessnous That word is so real. Okay, so i will just start this off with ...
Apr 13, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 1.2 (Edited)
Timmy here for a quick review! I am going to attempt something Un-Timmy like... I am going to review without hitting any nitpicks that I see. I am just going ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Arrogant Ambitions
Timmy here for a quick review! Forgive me if my review is a bit short and to the point. I have a long list of them, and I only have ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Shadowed Pryde: Chapter Five
Timmy here for another review! (Thanks for pinging me!) As always, Nitpicks first! Nien --German for "No" :D “Jeez kid, you're feisty.” Wolverine said. ---I think normally, that would be ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 1.1 (Edited)
Timmy here for a quick review!! As always, Nitpicks first. Harriet, our maid, babysitter or hired help, who I see as a second mother, would be at the cooker. Her ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Never Ending Darkness (title pending) - Chapter Two
Timmy here for a review! As usual, Nitpicks first... She seemed to have made it a sport of hers-- break the law So here its about the hyphen(I think that ...
Mar 25, 2014 -
Re: Happy Birthday Grandma.
Timmy is here for a quick review!! As usual, Nitpicks first. yellows, whites, blues with the reds and oranges. This part seems rather vague and not real flowing. Perhaps you ...
Mar 25, 2014 -
Re: Shadowed Pryde: Chapter Four
Timmy here for a review! Better late than never, I suppose... I don't know if this is something you feel like doing, but could you maybe ping me next time? ...
Mar 25, 2014 -
Re: Cherokee
Timmy here for a quick review! This will mainly be a place for comments. This is a piece that I just can't nitpick. Doesn't seem right. Firstly, I wanted to ...
Mar 19, 2014 -
Re: Birds of Freedom
Timmy here for a quick review! You may get quite a few of these reviews from me in the near future... Once someone out of the blue reviews me, I ...
Mar 19, 2014 -
Re: The Evolution of Disney Princesses
Timmy here for a short, and probably unhelpful, review! First off, let me just clear something up with you before we delve into this piece any farther. It was not ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: Hawk's Eye - Chapter Five; part 2/2 Scrapped
Timmy here for a review, Dory! :D As usual, Nitpicks First. He could feel something hard poking at him. He was lying on something crinkly. It doesn't seem to be ...
Mar 16, 2014
