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Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 1 - Breakfast at the Inn
Timmy is here. (again) For another review! Nitpicks first! Castor stopped thinking and started brushing quickly realizing what she had said. Comma after "brushing" she washed her face and in ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale - The Prologue
Tim is here, for the fist time, for a review! Time to get down and get my hands dirty, eh? Nitpicks She plopped to the ground She plopped to the ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The Musical Confrontation and the Decision [1] [Twelve Days Before Christmas 11] *Edited*
Timmy here for a review, again!! This time I am going to do them allll... Your story has called, and I will never fall behind again! Well, hopefully not, anyway. ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The Leaping, Black-Clad Lords and the Portal [2] (Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*
Timmy has decided to show up today. Nitpicks good person, you go through, if not, banishment Two sentences, staring at "through"? Comments on story and whatnot So this will probably ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Univesal Declaration: Treatment
Timmy is here for another review! (Just keep reviewing, just keep reviewing. What do we do? Review, review, and cut! xD) Nitpicks away from my mother’s arms. Wouldn't it be ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Please wake up, we miss you.
Timmy is here for a review! You have reviewed so many of my pieces, and I haven't reviewed a single one of yours. I feel bad. :( Nitpicks And I ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 4.1
I am here sooner than usual, although that is irrelevant, right? The only thing that matters is that I got here!! At least, kind of the only thing... Nitpicks Our ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 3.3 (Edited)
Nargals stopped me. I had to use my stupendous powers to get here, and that took a long while. The accidental stop at an ice cream parlor didn't help matters. ...
May 22, 2014 -
Re: Never Ending Darkness- Chapter Four
Sorry it took me so long to get here! Nargals stopped me on the road. It was a perilous journey! Nitpicks, first!!! Aren't you excited? :D blood-red colored marks I ...
May 21, 2014 -
Re: you read too many books while i read the pages of your skin
I remember a little while ago receiving some help from you, Sparkles... This is your forte, not mine, so I don't know what help I can be, but I will ...
May 21, 2014 -
Re: The Leaping, Black-Clad Lords and the Portal [1] (Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*
Timmy is here for another amazing review! hee-hee She was never going to make it home in time anymore . Take out bolded word? Didn't make sense. He usually intervenes ...
May 19, 2014 -
Re: Lovely Ladies and the Capture [Part 9 Twelve Days Before Christmas] *Edited*
Timmy here for a review!! Most of them were dark blue with red lacing, or black with dark green. This sentence confused me.... Are they really blue and black, or ...
May 18, 2014 -
Re: Entranced
Timmy here for a quick review. Bright stars reflect upon the still-water Not even a blade of grass stirred upon the lake’s shore. Okay. Little nitpick here, but one nevertheless. ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: Adoption made the best of me
Timmy here for a review!! It was tough getting here. Nargals stopped me on the road! I barely survived to tell the tale... Nitpicks first, as usual! They do not ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: Hellfire's Pryde: Chapter Two
Timmy here for a review! Nitpicks, first! “But you should not have to, “keep your head down” Katya.” Piotr said suddenly. Now I know that this whole part is "technically" ...
May 11, 2014