TimmyJake

I AM HERE You must have figured that if you pinged me enough times, I would come to see just what you were annoying me for... and so here I ...

Timmy hereeeee So the fading light. You begin by describing that and how it's just light enough to see... but then Naomi and Avril go out into the street, Naomi ...

I'm hereeee The first half of this chapter makes me curious - about The Cut and how they operate. An example of what I'm wondering about is their agents. Mei ...

Timmy hereeee I like how light-hearted this chapter reads, and it has a younger feel in the narration, as though a younger Fleta is telling the story. It still has ...

You know, your book become even more and more awful for your main character as time goes on. All of these horrid things that are happening to Avril, her environment ...

I am hereeee There's basically nothing for me to say here, except to gush some compliments and leave with a few measly nitpicks. But that's nothing unusual for me when ...

Back again! Just a teensy bit late, but I'm sure you're used to that by now. >< how she had been the best friend I wasn't going to mention this. ...

Timmy here So I will keep this pretty short as there isn't much to say except in the line of compliments. I love that you're coming up with all these ...

I'm finally here! Um, woah. 0.O I've read through this once, which is normal for when I would begin writing my review - starting the first parts and scanning through ...

Timmy here! So I'll just get right into it and let everything sort themselves out~ First, let's talk about your narration - how you give us the actions and descriptions. ...

HAI So this is going to be short and sweet, just like the piece. :3 I love your ideas and how you wrap them around the characters, just like the ...

I'M HERE - yet again. o.0 Maybe by the end of the year, I can be fully caught up. :p just like any other house would if it didn’t have ...

I love how you didn't forget to touch on sometimes the worst part of being drunk - the hangover. And I especially liked how you didn't forget about it in ...

I HAVE COME Okay, before we continue, let me just say I'm very proud of myself - not for actually showing up, even though I'm five chapters behind, but because ...

Timmy here! I'm a bit uncertain where I'm at in the book, but I think that's mostly my fault as it's been a while since I've read on this character. ...