TimmyJake

Timmy here! Now I am uncertain of this Neva. He still seems very pompous, self-centered, arrogant, blah, blah, blah, but there is a certain... goodness about him. I mean, he ...

Timmy here! So this is the first time you have split scenes in one chapter, and I think you did it very well. Actually, I didn't notice the breaks. I ...

Timmy here! Oh, wow. For some reason when you described this character--Neva--I had an image of the "buff" cupid from Percy Jackson, Death from Book 2 of the second series ...

Timmy here! Yes, I am going to attempt the impossible. And that is adding something onto an already perfect review of your work here. Pompadour hasn't left much for me ...

Timmy here! Yay! We have more involvement with Naya, which is really cool. You have set up her character to be one that everyone will enjoy. In the beginning, I ...

Timmy here! I believe we are going somewhere with this story now--so fast, in fact. They went from being completely abducted, in chains, in a facility--whatever you want to call ...

Timmy here! Being the last reviewer is so tough.

Timmy here for a review! Ooooh. an escape scene now! I liked this chapter a ton, especially the entire part where they are taking their weapons. It is a scene ...

Timmy here! This is your best chapter yet--and I am not saying this because I am writing it right now and I need some last-minute praise to fudge up my ...

To tell you guys the truth, I have no idea why I am reviewing this. Perhaps its because I like delving into pieces that make no apparent sense, or perhaps ...

Timmy here! As usual, I will do my best to feebly whisper a few nitpicks, do a mile of praise, and then vanish in the wind... (Or so my poetic ...

Timmy here! I thought it was the sweetest and most Christian-like thing for him to do. Narodnaya (did I get her name right this time?!) seems to be a good ...

Timmy here! (as promised. ) :) So I am going to focus on action and the character in this review, and possibly head on over to some grammar stuff, but ...

O_o That is all I have for this chapter... xD Just kidding... Timmy here! I do believe that this is the chapter where Christian has felt the most... awkward and ...

Hewwo, Wivvy! So for this review, I am going to attempt something I usually can never do--an entire review without the aid of quotes! Let's see if I can do ...