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Re: Magic Survives: Chapter 2- Monsters in the dark
Timmy here! Interesting is the least word I could use to pinpoint the feeling this first chapter has. I really like the setting, and how you opened the novel is ...
Aug 19, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 60 (Revised)
Timmy here! It is only now, when I stop and look back at this entire novel, taking in each of your characters, that I realize the huge story behind each ...
Aug 19, 2014 -
Re: Redwing - Chapter 6
Timmy here! You have sped up the pace, not in the sense that I feel rushed and that the book is speeding along at the speed of sound--but we now ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: Trying Chapter 4.2
Just beautiful. I feel rather inadequate to do anything except for just bask in its... I don't know how to word it. The characters. The descriptions. The dialogue . The ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: Magic Survives Chapter 1: The Fables
Timmy here! This will be a short review because I have seen most of this, only a more concise and less specific version. I like the fact that you have ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: Magic Survives- Prologue
Timmy here! Hmmm... prologues. This link here may help you decide if you really want to keep a prologue or not. I will focus this review on simply you having ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 9.1
Timmy here! This chapter is, by far, your best. Everything flows so beautifully and your descriptions are really coming along so well. I truly envy your way of describing the ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 59 (Revised)
Timmy here! Interesting. This isn't really what I had envisioned of Morrow... From what I had heard of him, I envisioned him as he was--but minus the drunken fool. It ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: Coffee and Conversations with Jesus
Timmy here! So I am not going to nitpick anything on this piece; it's written very well, I think. I will simply go through and make this something of my ...
Aug 15, 2014 -
Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God-Chapter 7
Timmy here! So my first thought here was that Jean seems to be becoming... accustomed to the ways of this strange (to him) woman, and how she reacts to things. ...
Aug 15, 2014 -
Re: Phoenix Inferno
Hey Sis! I remember that I told you I would review this, so here I am! The story idea is very neat, and sounds mysterious and dystopian. The character herself ...
Aug 15, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 58 (Revised)
Timmy here! I absolutely love your colorful characters, Blue. Especially Rowan. I am assuming she is one of those silly circus performers/owners that were trying to get Christian to come ...
Aug 14, 2014 -
Re: Why the Clouds Go By
Timmy here, late but still here! I told you I would review the other piece, but I stared at it for a long time and wondered what say, typed out ...
Aug 14, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 57 (Revised)
Timmy here! I hate you.
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 8: Confessions
Timmy here! Wow, I am really surprised by how her aunt acts towards her. Not in a bad way, but a good way, I assure you. It was really nice ...
Aug 12, 2014