TimmyJake

Timmy here! With a longer piece such as this, I shall do nitpicks as I read, okay? I strainedmy ear This sentence has it's obvious issues. I think you can ...

Timmy here! I think the only reason this piece has so few reviews (Erm, none) is that the work is extremely long. As far as chapters go, it is fine, ...

Timmy here! This was a very emotional piece, right off the bat. The main character is leaving her family, and it was a very heart-wrenching scene. I don't completely understand ...

Timmy here! Hello, review day buddy! Let's get this show on the road. This is an interesting story, and very well written (especially if you add in your age. Wowee! ...

Timmy here! Ooooooh, a new perspective! I like this. Akia is the girl who was taken by the Whtachamacallit protection police (or whatever they were called). It seems to be ...

Timmy here! In this chapter, everything begins to liven up! The story is really moving along now, although not at a pace at which I cannot keep up, so that ...

Timmy here! So I review as I read with some of these longer pieces, so I shall put nitpicks and concerns first. She opened her eyes again once the breeze ...

Timmy here! The one thing that can never be praised enough with your style of writing is the voice . Your writing just brings us into the character, into her ...

Timmy here! So you say this is a little bit different than your old version? I still remember your old version quite clearly (how can you forget a piece by ...

Timmy here! I honestly don't know what to say. Reading through this, I thought it as very funny, sad in a humorous way, and just very silly. Very dramatic. I ...

Timmy here! Well, about time! But anyway, here I am, and here let's go. I thought this was a very refreshing change of chapters from the trip across the road ...

Timmy here! Ooooooh! Some action and fighting. At last. My favorite. :D I thought this was a great chapter to spice up the book a bit and keep things moving. ...

Timmy here! wow, just wow. The entire story is so wonderful. It's written simply, like it was intended for younger kids, but the story inside the words is so cool, ...

Timmy here! The wood-elf and the Rover king looked at each other. I know it's weird for me to begin on a negative note - well, not negative , but ...

Timmy here! Sorry for not showing up earlier. I was... mislaid by other review requests. But I am here now, so all's well that ends well, I suppose. Or begins ...