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  • Article / Essay » General, Other Re: Homosexuality--A Discussion for All Whom It Interests

    Timmy here So I'm going to make this short and sweet, as everyone has beaten this to death already. There's almost nothing left with me to say! Unlike the other ...

    Jun 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Imaginary Friends - 16: Hole in the Head (part 1/3)

    Timmy here! I'm trying here to keep this review as far away from technical errors possible, and focused more on the big issues. Let's see if there's enough here for ...

    Jun 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Remnants Of Beauty

    This is going to be just about the shortest review in history - because there's little to say. But I know this poem! It's the one we challenged each other ...

    Jun 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Seven

    Here again! And for the last time. o.0 Someone needs to come out with some more chapters.... *hintshints* So this is yet another chapter that requires me to dig particularly ...

    Jun 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Six

    Timmy here... again. Yeah, I know I skipped a chapter. But these are getting so good, there was nothing for me to critique in that chapter save for a few ...

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Four

    Here again. c: Basically this whole chapter was so mean. >< I mean, yeah, we already could guess what Resnick was going to do to Sadie, but man, he's not ...

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Malted Green and Rotting Fingertips

    I'm here again. c: You have many wonderful reviews already, so I'm sure this will be quite a bit redundant, but I'll do my best to find anything new. I ...

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Three

    Timmy hereeee again. So there are basically no points or nitpicks I can pick up in this chapter, and you've written all the scenes so perfect, I wouldn't know where ...

    Jun 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Literature Re: Revolution

    Here for a quick review. Hm, I only have one thing I'm not sure about in this poem. And you'll have to forgive me if it doesn't actually exist, but ...

    Jun 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Fleta's Folly (pt. 3)

    Timmy hereeee I'm going to ignore that ending. >> So... this seems to be the ending of Fleta's little story, right? Nothing more to this? Okay, good. Why did you ...

    Jun 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: One Wish

    So you get to be my guinea pig, because it has been so long since I reviewed poetry. D: Like, I think it's even been six months or more. >< ...

    Jun 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Color Photographs, Chapter Two

    Here again! I'll make this short and sweet, as there isn't much for me to say - your writing has become so good that I don't know what to nitpick ...

    Jun 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Imaginary Friends - 15: The One That Got Away

    Timmy hereee! I'm just going to head right into it this time, okay? - no opening paragraph, blah-blah. Let's get started. I read the part with Sara - the quick ...

    Jun 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Tainted Skies 3.1

    I'm here to finish catching up. ;) This was a good place to have a flash-back for Sky, as it brings in her sister and father's relationship, and implies how ...

    Jun 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Forgotten Ones #1

    I'm finally here! It took me a moment to understand what went on in this chapter, and who was the main character in this... and then I saw who it ...

    Jun 12, 2015


Everything I’ve ever let go of has claw marks on it.
— David Foster Wallace