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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Book Man, Chapter 72 (Revised)

    Timmy here! hehe "In which there will be a smattering of romance." Well, I don't know if that is really what happened. It seemed to be more of a stammering ...

    Sep 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 4

    Timmy here! This will be a short review, because there isn't much more I think I can say to add onto what your other awesome reviewers have already stated. But ...

    Sep 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Eating Grasshoppers

    Timmy here! Now I am going to tell you something here: When I read through this, I didn't get the feeling that this was too much of a different style ...

    Sep 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Imaginary Friends - 9: Imagination

    Timmy here! Wow, I think this chapter was very appropriate, and that it gave me more of an insight on what kind of a person this doctor is - and ...

    Sep 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 3 Part 2

    Timmy here! So this was a very neat chapter, and it told me a lot of stuff. You have a way of writing that fills the reader in with a ...

    Sep 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Truant: Chapter One

    Timmy here! Well, I don't know what I can say that won't be merely a repeat of the other reviews, but I will do my best to make this somewhat ...

    Sep 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Book Man, Chapters 70-71 (Revised)

    Timmy here! So this chapter was very tense, and rather sad in many places. I now understand what you were talking about when you mentioned that those who were killed ...

    Sep 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Elementárni ~ 1.2 *adjusted*

    Timmy here! I would love to give you a nice long review on this, Dory. Honestly I would. But looking at this, I think the only new thing I could ...

    Sep 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Broken Pencils Are Pointless 3.1

    Timmy here! I don't know... but I feel like starting this off with diving straight into my teensy nitpicks. So let's go! Juss get in where you can, and hang ...

    Sep 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 23

    Timmy here! So this chapter was mucho exciting, and very... fantastical, I guess? :P The world between worlds was very neat, and to me, had the just perfect amount of ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: cirrus

    Timmy here! Reading through this, I honestly don't know what to say... The piece is empowering, beautiful, flowing, has such an amazing message and the descriptions. Gah. What do I ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Revenge's Shadow Chapter 4

    Timmy here! I enjoyed the content of this chapter, and the massive amount of thought your character has. It's the most prominent thing in this story, I think. There is ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Tomorrow - Chapter Twelve

    Timmy here! So this work had a lot more of her feelings and though inside it, which I thought was awesome. I love the entire thing, and the fact that ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: The Story Of Summer (Ch. 8): Sisters

    Timmy here! This was a very interesting chapter, and I like the correlation between all the characters. This seems to be a very close-knit group of theirs, and I love ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: Contemptable Wrest - (Ch. 12) Part 2: A Foggy Hundred-Yard Field Goal into the Cradle of Life

    Timmy here! Like last one, I will go for some technicalities before heading to the comments on story and whatnot. But we’d need luck too. Comma after luck He bent ...

    Aug 31, 2014


When a good man is hurt, all who would be called good must suffer with him.
— Euripides