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Re: Queen Bee- any critique welcome
Timmy here! I will do my best to make this a good review, but Noelle took a lot of what I would say, so let's hope I can make this ...
Sep 14, 2014 -
Re: The Cold Wind of Death
Timmy here! This will be a short review because I don't really know what I can write to help you with, but here I go, anyway! Let's explore this and ...
Sep 14, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (11-2)
Timmy here! So I admit I am just throwing myself in this work without knowing the plot at all, so I will base my review off style and nitpicks, okay? ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: ...
Timmy here? I honestly don't know how to review this. I am no good at doing lyrics, so this review will probably stink, but I will do my best to ...
Sep 12, 2014 -
Re: Why Christianity Is A Lie: A Comprehensive Breakdown of the Failures Within Christianity Part 1
Timmy here! This will be a short review because I haven't got much time, but I will give you what I can. First off, tell your Friend Emily that she ...
Sep 11, 2014 -
Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God - Chapter 9
Timmy here! So we aren't in Blois yet, eh? That is okay, I think. Except for one thing: This chapter seems like it should be merely an extension of the ...
Sep 11, 2014 -
Re: My Mind is a Concrete Bubble
Timmy here! This will be a short review, because there isn't much good I can do to this piece... seeing as though I am not very good at this kind ...
Sep 10, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 24
Timmy here! So in this chapter, they see a city.... I like how everything was different from what Cabot expected, and so it seems as though Earth travels in a ...
Sep 10, 2014 -
Re: Truant: Chapter Two
Timmy here! My chest slowly rises and falls as I step towards the long, wooden ramp. My breaths are quick and raspy, clearly showing I'm scared. So these two sentences ...
Sep 9, 2014 -
Re: Misused and Abused (1)
Timmy here! Okay, so this is something you wrote a long time ago? Good. Then you probably won't be offended if I am harsh at all. You told me you ...
Sep 8, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 73 (Revised)
Timmy here! So this was an interesting chapter which seemed to have a focus on Tirion and Morrow, and pretty much what they thought of the situation as it stood, ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Lights
tIMmy hear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Teh frst ting i notced was tht yur poem was rlly long like rlly long, and hrd to read. I mean, u culd hav maed it a lil ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Ode to Braces
Timmy here! Why did you ask me to review this piece? Do you expect me to nitpick something that doesn't have anything wrong with it? So this was a very ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 10: Tears Dry On Their Own
Timmy here! YAY! You have a Mercy piece! That makes me sooo happy. To be honest, I think I like Mercy a lot more than Layla. She seems to be ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 5
Timmy here! So first things first, I think we should go through one teensy nitpick, the only one I will address in this review because I think I want to ...
Sep 6, 2014