TimmyJake

Timmy here Okay, may the first thing I say be in complete disagreement with your other reviewers? Now that sounds kind of mean for me to say, I guess. But ...

Timmy here Yayyy, we get to see some of Falyn again. So you're just writing from their two perspectives, with little bits thrown in of the evil dudes - primarily ...

Timmy here I think you're doing a wonderful job with the brother and sister relationship that is starting to bud again, and I love, love that you're not going for ...

Timmy here O.O She is quite, the, er, character in this one. Like Noelle said so well, this chapter had such amazing descriptions and I am not sure if I ...

Timmy here I really liked this chapter because it's showing Rease settling in to her new home, and learning the quirks and how her environment is... which also teaches us ...

Timmy here Have I mentioned before how much I like your characters? Because I like your characters - lurv them all, even those that don't act friendly. They're all so ...

Timmy here This will probably be a short review, because there isn't much for me to say here. The chapter is amazing, just like those before it, and answers a ...

Timmy here So I think this will be a shorter review because I don't know of much to say. This chapter is very good as it stands, and I see ...

Timmy here You always underestimate your writing and these chapters. Seriously. Every time you tell me about a new chapter, you say it's awkward, it's rough, it's boring, etc... And ...

Timmy here Wow, this piece is sad. Reading through it gave me a truly heart-wrenching feeling through me. It was wonderful. Yeah, I know that sounds somewhat morbid, but I ...

Timmy here So this one leads on to the part where she meets the rest of her family, so yayy for that. I have been looking forward to this, wondering ...

Timmy here So I am going to just go through like I did last time with my comments and such, and hopefully give you something helpful you can edit from. ...

Timmy here So I will just be reviewing this piece as I go, looking at it and commenting and the like as I go. I find that I see more ...

Timmy here I have taken a liking to simply commenting on the story and nitpicking as I go. As far as people liking that style... well, I dunno. But it ...

Timmy here I am finally here! I am sorry for the delay. I know I promised I would review this a long time ago, and I don't really have an ...