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Re: Dead Flowers
Isn't part of the fun for an author seeing when the readers realise certain twists? At least it is for me :) It's what I try to replicate in the ...
Dec 16, 2025 -
Re: Not Strong Enough: Chapter Two
As for the restaurant, I was confused bc of the timeline. I don't have a good grasp on how long they spent at the party.
Dec 15, 2025 -
Re: Not Strong Enough: Chapter Two
Oh I rly like him going to the party just bc he doesnt want to be home at all!
Dec 15, 2025 -
Re: Bliss
Aww thanks for the response. I see what you mean with associating sadness with blue. Should have thought of that! :3
Dec 12, 2025 -
Re: Katherine’s “super fun sleepover!”
Jup I figured this was Marcus. I just think he wasn't well foreshadowed in this one and it took too long to get to the good part xd
Dec 11, 2025 -
Re: Desdemona’s death
That explains so much!! This dream of yours sounds really creepy but also really cool!
Dec 11, 2025 -
Re: NYLON - 7
THE CELESTIAL BELONGS TO THE GUYS THEY'VE BEEN STEALING FROM. AHhhhhh
Dec 10, 2025 -
Re: NYLON - 6
Ah just a thought. Feels like now that I read the other chapters, that I'm a bit lost on how they arrived at the echo garden
Dec 10, 2025 -
Re: Small pile of sand
Fair =D
Dec 8, 2025 -
Re: i will paint skin
Juchu, I interpreted something correctly! :3
Dec 8, 2025 -
Re: i will paint skin
Oh I wonder what "he tied it to me" means. Is it just the apron or maybe a role you dont want?
Dec 8, 2025 -
Re: The many winding paths of Grasscove, USA: Part Two
The effort shows! I think this is one of your best works so far!
Dec 3, 2025 -
Re: Jontur - (1) The Previous Mission
Hi Ravena! I'm so happy you managed to review this, despite it not being your genre! I really appreciate that :3 I've seen your method in action before and I ...
Dec 2, 2025 -
Re: Chapter- 2, Together in Fall
Alright idk how I missed this but here goes. They see me rolling~ Ok I stop. First of all, I completely understand taking time off from writing. I'm no good ...
Dec 2, 2025 -
Re: Jontur - (1) The Previous Mission
And I am honoured that you reviewed after such a long pause. Thank you :3 Yup, it's nerve-wracking but I’m glad I posted so I can go back to business ...
Dec 1, 2025
