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Re: The Face
There is a certain catharsis in not clicking "this is review" I really like the first two stanzas. Again I have a thought of melody in my head for them ...
Mar 18 -
Re: but anatomy can be tranquil too
Alright Alex. Here's my contribution to the "comments only" section of the Green event =D (And yes that's the reason for the other comment too but I won't be able ...
Mar 18 -
Re: Arousing Anatomy
Ah well, I will start with this one =D And immediately you hit me with a word I need to look up XD Ohhh that is an interesting thought: "As ...
Mar 18 -
Re: World of Souls - Prologue
So. The story of my heart. Here's some questions for the Prologue =D 1) What was your initial reaction to the prologue? 2) What were your favourite parts? 3) What ...
Mar 18 -
Re: Piercing the Veil CHP 2 {Sanders Sides Fanfiction}
Ah are the centaurs the main story then? =) I don't necessarily need answers to the question. It's just some things I was musing while reading ^^ Regarding the different ...
Mar 16 -
Re: Cherry Blossoms And Steel (NOT YET READY!)
You can edit stories after publishing, even the title :)
Mar 3 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 6} Chapter 7 (part 1)
Thanks for the reply :3 I ...forgot about the part that Jarid didn't meet Aurora @.@ As for the "But that's wrong"... I just feel like it sounds weird and ...
Mar 3 -
Re: CHAPTER ONE of The Skill Thief of Manila: A LitRPG Apocalypse by Ramon Galvez
Love that you immediately noticed this :3
Feb 27 -
Re: The City, Part Nine, death?
Hi matt, I think your critism is fair. Where would you like to hear pointers and suggestions? I'm not sure what specifically is wrong with this review in this regard? ...
Feb 20 -
Re: The City, Part Nine, death?
Ah that makes sense :3 I redact my disappointment too. Keep up the good work and happy writing :)
Feb 20 -
Re: Jontur - (1) The Previous Mission
No worries and thank you so much for taking the time! I'll see what I can do about making ppl feel less lost! Thanks again nad have a good day ...
Feb 19 -
Re: Jontur - (1) The Previous Mission
I'm glad =D You could answer the questions to give me a bit of an overview of what you liked and disliked :)
Feb 17 -
Re: William tells Henry about his odd dream
Well guess somone else will have to write 2 reviews then XD
Feb 15 -
Re: Christmas at the Walsh family mansion
creeper. I know. My point is: What is she doing here when she is not relevant FOR THIS PLOT. It feels like you're not listening to what I'm saying.
Feb 14 -
Re: The monster within | Chapter Fifteen | Nicole
Tskkk this American Defaultism =D Pepperidge Farm remembers (Lol)
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