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Re: A Peasant's Plea
Well the dice rolled a 1 and this is the oldest request so here we are! Oh no⦠Is this about the disastrous winter campaign that gets their revival a ...
Apr 7 -
Re: Syboleth ch. 6: Social Medium
I'm getting the feeling that it's the covering up part that the girls and Garrett are creeped out by and not just the presence of the "dots". Guess if you ...
Apr 5 -
Re: Syboleth ch. 5: Slot Machines
Still not sure why you needed to keep the slots so obviously hidden a few chapters ago. Instead of drawing attention, you could have kept it vague and bam, reveal ...
Apr 5 -
Re: Syboleth ch. 3: Special
*rereading in preparation for ch7 (guess what is chosen for today's review? XD)* Is she talking to an AI? That has mastered the art of typo? 1st chapter has her ...
Apr 5 -
Re: Julius Caesar
For April it doesn't count if you mention them here xd I'm not putting up a daily wallpost for nothing ~
Apr 2 -
Re: How To Kill Your Dragon [Ch. XVIII, Nine] - Part I
Hey I live for nitpicks. Let me have them qq
Apr 1 -
Re: Carry Me
Hmm I think I'm starting to get what poetry is all about. It's giving a voice to the feelings you are currently having, huh? Thank you for all the explanations, ...
Mar 25 -
Re: ππ«πͺ Anything is a party if you want it to be πͺπ«π
I think there's a lot of directions she can go since she's still going to school. And she's very loved by her fathers too! And she has one "normal" friend ...
Mar 23 -
Re: ππ«πͺ Anything is a party if you want it to be πͺπ«π
*subliminal messages are fun* You have the sudden urge to read Digimon fic *subliminal ending* Is it weird that I kinda have hope for Janice to become a creepypasta that ...
Mar 23 -
Re: She knows me better than anyone
I really like the theme of this poem! I especially like this phrasing: some know the version of me I let the world see. The rhyme and the rhythm really ...
Mar 19 -
Re: WoS Chapter 1 Part 1: Zoe
"But Tikaya, these kids barely resemble Japanese children!" Shhh don't worry about it. We're actually dealing with the rarely-known nationality: "Digimon Protagonist"-Japanese! This is part 1 of 2 of
Mar 18 -
Re: What I made of You (in the hours I could not sleep)
And thank you for giving an explanation of your thought process! I am no good with poems but I love listening to people drawing meaning from them :3
Mar 18 -
Re: World of Souls - Prologue
Hahah you know nothing about Digimon yet . Also the age thing is a trick because Izumi's clearly "standard Digimon Protagonist"-aged ~ Thank you so much for the review and ...
Mar 18 -
Re: PETALS OF MY HEART
I also saw you doing reviews and⦠well poetry is not my strong suit so have a comment instead! Yay for the Green Room comment challenge :3 FIRST UP: How ...
Mar 18 -
Re: What I made of You (in the hours I could not sleep)
Hia! I saw you doing some reviews and thought I would choose your poem for the Green Room comments :3 Ohh I find the structure of the poem so interesting! ...
Mar 18
