Tikaya

Well it is safe to say that this chapter is a big reason why I went ahead to write this story. Cover Art is a screenshot from the Original Show, ...

Ahh teacher interference! How unfortunate XD Neus saying, 'oh well, he came to check Marnie's foot but he never leaves right away because he needs to make sure we still ...

Cover Art is a screenshot from Episode 9 of the Original Show. Questions: 1) What's your initial reaction to the Aftermath? 2) What were your favourite parts and why? 3) ...

I love it when ppl reply to reviews :) It could spiral into interesting conversations ^^ well I am old (get of my lawnnnn) so I wasn't familiar with that ...

Lol I had to giggle at that so yesss!!!

Oh I do like that last one abt her hating the festival :) I don't think Malcolm has time for food when they are under attack but if Cherry is ...

I GET IT NOW. She can't eat ice cream because she's a ghost!!!! Ahhh that makes so much sense!!! Also you do not need to change anything because ofc Raisa ...

Will read it tmr 💜🖤

Well you do have the farm stuff and idr farm stuff happening in the first episode of TWD xd (Also England is a new location so...! =D)

I'm really glad you found my running commentary helpful :3 Thanks for the explanations and happy editing!

Maybe you could make this more obvious in narration?

Oh it was very short so I don't have a good grasp on your style yet. It was definitely interesting to read tho! Thanks for the explanations yet I feel ...

but you said all interpretations are fine qq

Thanks for the reply! I am always so unsure with poems so I'm really happy that you liked my thoughts

Hmmm well maybe you could write that?