Tikaya

Hi Cats! Reached this story in the Green Room. I already made it to October for stories that have only 1 Review, yay! I don’t think I’m the correct addressee ...

Hach, this is such a joy to read. I really like this line: “slipping seamlessly into a role he hadn’t known was vacant” and how he thinks abt Marin’s position ...

Alright third chapter of yours I read 😊 Ah I was afraid I could never give any genuine tips but here we go. I know the line itself is already ...

You continue to be so good with balancing your narration. Absolutely love the pacing here. I really like your characters and just… Hach, I’m just so in the moment with ...

So I enjoyed the beginning. It’s very whimsical and you’re writings so solid, I could slip right into a comfortable reading zone. And then you hit me with Kei’s reaction ...

Well I enjoy a good fight scene so here we go. I know it’s common in French to separate dialogue from the narrative but it’s just not for me. Not ...

Hi Ravena, look what I found of yours in the Green Room =D I love the water falls. The first picture is so beautiful and sharp! The fact that this ...

So so far I could imagine the room very well and you were precise with your metaphors. But I don’t really feel this sentence: “The room around her seemed to ...

My first thought has been “I wonder why they’re wishing for a clockwork heart.” I mean, I often times think that I wish I were a robot bc I find ...

I am known to be merciful at times, so I shall heed your request! Hi hello! Here to once again try my hand at reviewing poetry. Must admit, it is ...

So since I loved your other story, I’m glad you also have this one in the Green Room. And what a first line to read =D Oh this is intriguing! ...

Ah I wish there was a bit more description of where Zachary is, like what the room looks like before we head into the argument. But I really, really like ...

XD there is a running gag in my friend circle that I never write down names I hear correctly and I never pronounce names I see written correctly either! So ...

Well then, it’s probably too late for any feedback to be relevant for school but this is in the Green Room so have my thoughts anyway ^^ I also have ...

Oh I really like that the man isn’t greedy, like I feared he would be with such cautionary tales and instead keeps thanking the girl. I also like that he ...