Tikaya

Believe it or not, I got unreasonably excited walking home from work today, knowing I get to read Ch4 later =D [And then the wife had ~plans~, so it’s MUCH ...

Alrighty, I think I remember most of your characters in this folder :) Oh and lookit, my 400th review =D And the dialogue formatting strikes again. Commas, creeper, commas. Oh ...

Ok I realise I am horrid at anagrams or whatever it means to rearrange words so I’m already stuck at the crossed-out letters xd But I am already intrigued by ...

Saw you doing reviews and decided to prioritise your story 😊 Hm you start with high emotion and that’s difficult to maintain over a narrative. Because we start in-medias-res with ...

Hallo raindrops :3 Saw you doing some reviews last month and decided to give priority to your story ^^ Hmm let’s begin with a story telling advice: passive sentence like ...

Good morning, yosh. Starting with Nylon this time around 😊 Hm I had the thought if Lily and Cody talked abt the amulet a bit more that you could use ...

Hi canopy, I didn’t forget that you’re the first person to write on my wall. So let’s check out this poem of yours :3 I rly like the line full ...

Ah so if I understand this correctly, you’re not going to post more chapters of this here but instead want us to come to webtoon for more? Maybe you should ...

Alright, second chapter. I’m slow today but I hope this helps you anyway :3 I like this image: “echoing in waves that seem to chase after Lilian.” I do enjoy ...

Oh I already like this summary, very intriguing! I don’t think I like this description: “Besides this hint of masculinity, his perfect skin is completely unblemished“ I get that the ...

First of all, I like the name of the poem. Let’s see if it ties into the actual text itself! Ohh I like this: but I never really looked outside ...

There we go. Finally made it back to this story. It’s gonna be weird since I know something of the characters already =D …And we begin with a verrry long ...

Ah already the first line of Step 1 captured my attention. Nice comparison! Also the fact that when you are already down, you’re helpfully remembering all the other stuff you ...

Hia Smetana! Glad to see you’re writing novels =D Let me get straight into it. “Adam asked his mother“ that is redundant bc he already addressed the speech to his ...

Good morning, dove! „and their gaze shifts towards me” oh I could feel the DREAD in that line. And I like how you describe the voice of the narrator, that ...