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Hi rebel, Watch me procrastinate in real time while I look at this poetry work of yours xd Hmm my first thought is that these lines would work really well ...

Aww I like that you write poems for birthdays :3 Let me look at it too! I like the descriptions in the first stanza, a solid start! Feels very immersive ...

Good morning 😊 Let me get right into the review. I feel like you could have read over this again before and after posting. YWS swallowed some of your punctuation ...

Hi Ravena 😊 I rly think those lines are a very good explanation: That He or his kingdom could exist In a distortion even more intricate Like it would make ...

Oki final review of the day. Hi again creeper :) So the last thing I read of this folder is how Caspar died and you told me that little Suzanne ...

Hi hello! I have come for your story in the Green Room, let’s have fun 😊 I really like this stream of consciousness in your opening paragraph. I also really ...

Hi yosh, looks like I’m finally all caught up. Now you actually gotta write and edit the next part. And yes, I will be watching for ~dialogue formatting~ But first, ...

Hi creeper 😊 Here for yet another of your stories ^^ I really like the final line of the poem, the image of envy and rage running so deep that ...

Ok not bold. Good. I approve. Things can only get better from here =D Can you thoroughly enjoy something when you’re actually looking at your phone the entire time? oô ...

Hi hello! I saw your other chapter in the Green Room but decided to…actually read it from the beginning :3 That said. Why is everything in bold @.@ I find ...

Okay, more Bart and Marcus. Gotcha. “why did Mrs. Walsh let them” Let them what? Complete the sentence @.@ I’m also a bit confused abt where in the timeline we ...

Hey Tao, came to lift this out of the Green Room 😊 I rly like your first paragraph, setting up who this boy is. And the final line of that ...

So, did my 2 GR reviews and can come back to this =D I like how you set the scene here. Wished for like a tinnny reminder on where exactly ...

Good morning! I hope you have an excellent day! Saw your story pop up and figured, I’d check it out first thing today ^^ First note is grammar tho xd ...

Hey there, since I started reading from the beginning, I thought I might as well continue =D Also wanted to address some of the stuff you said under ch4. First ...