Tikaya

Alright, a new folder. Let’s get started. I already like Salem. His name’s nice and I like this motivation. Please at least consider looking into proper dialogue formatting. I don’t ...

Hi hello, you get another one from me today =D You might want to take a second look at your summary and fix the typo there 😉 I find your ...

Hi hello! Here for a review for your story ;3 Some grammar tips: “, it was all corn,” this sentence is in the middle of another one so you don’t ...

Hello there 😊 Like the line about the vixen being like a flame. It’s a nice imagine and it can also be seen literally since vixens do have the orange ...

So many poems still left in the Green Room. Alright, onward! My first thought about the mouth full of apples and metal was actually abt how this might be about ...

Another poem, another chance to improve at reviewing them 😊 Oh I like the strange emphasis that line creates: “she is, a doll she is” Hm it feels like between ...

Found another one I can initiate into the sacred forms of proper dialogue formatting =D “Now, you know I only let kids that are over 10 years old or over ...

Nothing’s better than a little reviewing in the morning ~ I think it’s saying something that I don’t know if the first 2 lines are an A/N or part of ...

My first thought is that these are a lot of knitting references. [I have friends who knit. They can talk endlessly abt it!] I really like that you spread out ...

Before I write anything else: are you okay? Please take care of yourself! Oh I really like that the cat is part of the reason why the narrator is reconsidering. ...

Ohhh and this time the introduction is abt someone seeing the ghosts! I already like this. I also like that we have a protagonist who knew what he got himself ...

Okay, time for the quiet member of the family. Let’s see what his deal is. Ah I had the thought that you could maybe link the direct post of each ...

And nowww the story of one of the kids. Oh boyy. I really like this introduction to show what her character arc shall be! Hm I feel like I find ...

Look I found a new folder of yours in the Green Room! And this time I can read it from start to finish! Hm I find this a particularly weak ...

I thoroughly enjoyed your analysis on infatuation (which I consistently want to call “infaturation”) and inspiration. I like how you break them both down so clearly and so that it ...