Tikaya

The dice called for chapter 2 almost immediately so I am back yet again :3 First of all tho, I’m not sure abt this sentence: “the more distance the world ...

Ah okay, the italics are a running theme, I see! Hmmm I find it a bit odd that you switch between Sere and Serana in narration without good reason. If ...

And now I am all caught up with Nova 😊 I guess you will have to post new chapters now hehe “like he's about to invade a country.” LOL Oh ...

Good Morning :3 Time for chapter 2 of Nova I like this description! “The house looks like it’s part of the forest, like it grew there instead of being built.” ...

Well look at what got chosen as the final task of the day =D Hia Lady, I’m looking forward to our new and improved, more competent heroes =D Something’s not ...

Hi Moth, I came for the next chapter. It took me a while but see, it can be done =D I like this first paragraph a lot more than the ...

Hio! I saw you being online earlier and wanted to check out the stuff you write :3 I already like the first paragraph :3 We get a strong feel for ...

The Dice are biased =D Here we are again, let’s see where our mentally unwell sylph is going :3 Hmmm again I feel like you front-load wayyy to much description. ...

In my country we are calling this the looping order. Like with knitting! Don’t look that up. Siiigh No wonder I was so thrown off by chapter “2” Let’s find ...

So after a weird detour over the prologue I have finally reached Ch2. And my usual spiel continues: beautiful sentences 😊 But I do have things to say other than ...

So since there’s no more Loosely Lawful to read and your NovMo project isn’t out yet, I put a slot of “something else from Vento” on my dice rotation [yes, ...

Ya know that it’s the AN itself that makes me not want to read this every time I open this chapter? I just… I really hate it when authors throw ...

Hey Ravena, the dice chose you again (you have 2 stories in the running after all =D) I really like the beginning already, and how clear it is that we’re ...

So I lit up a candle in celebration of the dice choosing Delirium Ch2 😊 And we’re still sticking with Lydia, good to know. Let’s see what diabolical things the ...

Good Morning! That is a very long chapter. Have you thought about maybe breaking it up into multiple uploads to make it more palpable to readers? Second thought of the ...