Tikaya

Hi creeper 😊 Here for yet another of your stories ^^ I really like the final line of the poem, the image of envy and rage running so deep that ...

Ok not bold. Good. I approve. Things can only get better from here =D Can you thoroughly enjoy something when you’re actually looking at your phone the entire time? oô ...

Hi hello! I saw your other chapter in the Green Room but decided to…actually read it from the beginning :3 That said. Why is everything in bold @.@ I find ...

Okay, more Bart and Marcus. Gotcha. “why did Mrs. Walsh let them” Let them what? Complete the sentence @.@ I’m also a bit confused abt where in the timeline we ...

Hey Tao, came to lift this out of the Green Room 😊 I rly like your first paragraph, setting up who this boy is. And the final line of that ...

So, did my 2 GR reviews and can come back to this =D I like how you set the scene here. Wished for like a tinnny reminder on where exactly ...

Good morning! I hope you have an excellent day! Saw your story pop up and figured, I’d check it out first thing today ^^ First note is grammar tho xd ...

Hey there, since I started reading from the beginning, I thought I might as well continue =D Also wanted to address some of the stuff you said under ch4. First ...

Believe it or not, I got unreasonably excited walking home from work today, knowing I get to read Ch4 later =D [And then the wife had ~plans~, so it’s MUCH ...

Alrighty, I think I remember most of your characters in this folder :) Oh and lookit, my 400th review =D And the dialogue formatting strikes again. Commas, creeper, commas. Oh ...

Ok I realise I am horrid at anagrams or whatever it means to rearrange words so I’m already stuck at the crossed-out letters xd But I am already intrigued by ...

Saw you doing reviews and decided to prioritise your story 😊 Hm you start with high emotion and that’s difficult to maintain over a narrative. Because we start in-medias-res with ...

Hallo raindrops :3 Saw you doing some reviews last month and decided to give priority to your story ^^ Hmm let’s begin with a story telling advice: passive sentence like ...

Good morning, yosh. Starting with Nylon this time around 😊 Hm I had the thought if Lily and Cody talked abt the amulet a bit more that you could use ...

Hi canopy, I didn’t forget that you’re the first person to write on my wall. So let’s check out this poem of yours :3 I rly like the line full ...