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Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 5
Hey RatHat 😊 See I rolled the dice and they said it’s time for the next chapter of Eternal Beauty! (Chapter 5. Chapter 5. Chapter 5) By the way, every ...
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Re: Everbound Prologue : Tapestries And Temptations. (Revisited)
Hi Moth, came for the other work of yours in the Green Room ^^ I find the first two paragraphs very fitting! They set the scene and I can imagine ...
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Re: Delirium - Chapter 3
Good evening Ravena 😊 The dice are calling for more Delirium so here we are. Let me just get the candle real quick XD (I feel this story is a ...
Jan 11 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 6} Chapter 3
Hio! It’s been almost 2 months now so forgive me for still not reading this from the beginning, I’ll just do what remains in the GR 😊 Maybe you do ...
Jan 11 -
Re: Sins Of The Father Chapter One: The Father, The Son & The Unholy Ghost. (Part. 1.1.)
Hi Moth, have finally reached the latest chapter of the story. I remember now that one of my friends also characterizes Jason as a poet so now I feel like ...
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Re: The City with Half-Baked Buildings.
Good Morning 😊 This essay has been on my list for the longest time so here I am! I do have a question, why did you put “it” here instead ...
Jan 11 -
Re: Within Willow Creek: Chapter 3
Alrighty I have come for the final chapter of those that I haven’t read 😊 I guess you need to come back and upload a few more now! Maybe you ...
Jan 10 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 4
Chapter 4, Tikaa, chapter 4! *double and triple checks* Hi RatHat 😊 Back for more :3 Hmm I’m surprised that the 2 new ppl are immediately accosted by the treasurer. ...
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Re: Within Willow Creek: Chapter 2
The dice called for chapter 2 almost immediately so I am back yet again :3 First of all tho, I’m not sure abt this sentence: “the more distance the world ...
Jan 9 -
Re: Within Willow Creek
Ah okay, the italics are a running theme, I see! Hmmm I find it a bit odd that you switch between Sere and Serana in narration without good reason. If ...
Jan 9 -
Re: Chapter Three: Pain O’clock
And now I am all caught up with Nova 😊 I guess you will have to post new chapters now hehe “like he's about to invade a country.” LOL Oh ...
Jan 9 -
Re: Chapter Two: Welcome to Nowhere
Good Morning :3 Time for chapter 2 of Nova I like this description! “The house looks like it’s part of the forest, like it grew there instead of being built.” ...
Jan 9 -
Re: Agents of Time: Chapter One; The Mansion
Well look at what got chosen as the final task of the day =D Hia Lady, I’m looking forward to our new and improved, more competent heroes =D Something’s not ...
Jan 8 -
Re: Sins Of The Father Chapter One: The Father, The Son & The Unholy Ghost. (Part. 1)
Hi Moth, I came for the next chapter. It took me a while but see, it can be done =D I like this first paragraph a lot more than the ...
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Re: Woman in Black
Hio! I saw you being online earlier and wanted to check out the stuff you write :3 I already like the first paragraph :3 We get a strong feel for ...
Jan 8
