Tikaya

Ah I had a bit of a déjà-vû! But ofc this is the kid’s perspective after I read the parents’ perspective a little while ago! I feel like the slower ...

So curious in fact that I read the other story right after! I do feel like you could have had a tiny reminder what kinda letter she talked abt, just ...

Heya~ After the few Poppy side stories, back to Poppy-for-real XD I also find her having a mirror she can look at first thing in the morning a cool character ...

Morning Laylay~ I’m jumping in at ch3 so let’s see what you have in store for us ^^ I like how the first paragraph is dripping with personality :3 (Also ...

Good morning! Love that you included links to your other chapters ^^ I think I have come up with another writing tip that might benefit you: try to combine dialogue ...

Am in a bit of a poet-y mood so hi Witch Aet~ Before reading this, I would like you to know that every time I saw this on my spreadsheet, ...

Heya~ Oha that is a surprisingly dark thing to read (yes, yes usually your stories are creepy and well-deserving of the horror genre) but mannn a comment like this: “so ...

And Number 2, right after ^^ I know I know, it says hiatus but hey, maybe it’ll spark some imagination. Or a second lamp for attracting the moths away from ...

Hello friend~ I am already in love with the black birds that speak so easily with a monster~ I also like how knowledgeable the monster is but that it still ...

Good morning! Oh I like the concept! I really like the idea of this entity suddenly being born as a normal human, without knowing what to do with all these ...

Good morning and welcome! This story feels like it has a lot of layers, like a poem. I like the imagery of the bell! That said, I feel like, especially ...

Hia! I wanted to wait and see if anyone else picks this up before you get the second Green Room review but who else to get my first review as ...

Heyo~ Hmmm I think the scene itself is really good! I like the focus on the parents and how they managed to get their child out. I think part of ...

Powerful starting paragraph! Oh I wonder if Marie was buried in the very same cemetery that Rose drew her on the altar in! The symbolism! Also another neat paragraph, that ...

Morning~ A quick review for a short little snippet ^^ Hmm it doesn’t really feel like this is a complete piece. It’s very short and doesn’t really give any additional ...