Tikaya

Well, I was always kinda hoping you would start reviewing novels—something closer to what you also write (review what you write and all xd) but well, the time has come ...

Good morning! Let’s look at your very long chapters that you posted recently =D Starting with this one! Alright, Samantha , the first child. And I like that while you ...

Soo, fight scenes are kinda my bread and butter so I am looking forward to yours :3 “ The door cracked and splintered, but not until it gave way” Okay, ...

Five is my favourite number so I’m hyped for this :3 I do like the first sentence! But I feel like if you go for such a beginning, it calls ...

Heya~ I like how you start with setting the scene! I feel like you rely too much on adjectives/adverbs but otherwise, great start! What others do you mean here? “where ...

Morning! Oh my… the story from Thorn’s perspective. We all know why she digs that hole but I am curious if he knew too… “ and she was happy to ...

Since I’m posting long chapters, I like to check out what other people put into theirs =D And also I am curious what another person who read Nine likes to ...

Good morning and a warm welcome :3 Let’s take a look at your work, shall we? It might be helpful if you put a bit more info abt your work ...

Ah, the quote of the day~ I did miss those =D Hia Rebel! Time for me to read more Nine huh, it has been mentioned often enough in April XD ...

I know I know, it is free to watch… but I seem to never find the time to watch anything but Starcraft Videos while I eat my lunch @.@ So ...

Gooood morning!! As promised, ch4! ….this reads a lot like a first draft. Like… from the typos, missing commas and the somewhat stilted flow of their dialogue… I have trouble ...

And a bit more of Asher 😊 I do like how you structured this and that you mention all the major players. I feel like Asher would have been a ...

Hia again today. I tried reading this yesterday and idk why but I couldn’t concentrate. So let’s try this again! Ok and that is a sinister sentence to read: “Another ...

Well then, you didn’t answer my PM but your work still remains in the Green Room so let’s look at this context-less pre-climax you have here 😊 I already like ...

Ok came here in search of clarity. The confusion continues but I do like the dialogue in the first paragraph (even if it is still hard to follow!) I also ...