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Re: The clowns of the circus
Alright this is the dream story. I remember. I even read the tiny snippet that comes between this and the first part XD Maybe this will finally give context to ...
May 25 -
Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 3- The Aftermath (Final Part)
It’s been a while =D Interesting that she eventually does break and answer Karkey’s message, hmmm I know it was a nice evening until the incident and all but I ...
May 25 -
Re: Keir’s abandonment
Well colour me intrigued from that introduction! And Chapter 1 does well to highlight why we do not like his parents! Interesting that the parents think their child will be ...
May 25 -
Re: Alejandro’s story-The adventures of Poppy McLain
YWS is working again!!! Hi creeper! Time for more Poppy!! Oh I like how you phrase Alejandro’s situation! I was right there in the scene with him! That said, I ...
May 24 -
Re: Rosalyn’s origin: The Laurence family’s deepest woes
I don’t have much time today but I still wanted to check out one more of your stories, sitting in the GR ^^ I do like Asher so let’s see ...
May 23 -
Re: The Addicted Roundup
Saw you doing reviews and decided to show up for your story :3 Alrighty let’s head right in: Can you rly slam your head up? You might want to use ...
May 22 -
Re: Leaving Maven Hills
Oh I like the phrasing “bringing her into a hug”. I need to remember that :3 I also like how we are efficiently told why Alessia is leaving Maven Hills. ...
May 22 -
Re: hand in the wolf's mouth
Ohhh I like the title in relation to the summary already (otherwise I might have been a bit too slow to immediately understand what the poem's abt!) This definitely is ...
May 21 -
Re: The Means to Travel: A U.S. History Screenplay Assignment (Scene's 15-16)
Hui look, I refound the link to my Green Room Witch sign off (Is refound a word? It should be!) Anyway, the script! Ohh we are introducing invisible walls now! ...
May 21 -
Re: Dylan’s got some demons
Ahhh Dylan’s side of things! I remember I was rather sympathetic (up until he went and murdered his wife) to him. And I never understood why he kept making more ...
May 21 -
Re: The Means to Travel: A U.S. History Screenplay Assignment (Scenes 13-14)
Fine. I will start reading it again xd The descriptions are all working very well for me. I also like the way you described the historical events in scene 13, ...
May 21 -
Re: Is freedom all sweet in Heaven?
And one more, you are a prolific reviewer too afterall ^^ I still wish there was more context to your short stories… just some more information to set the scene, ...
May 20 -
Re: A clown will always sweep a ballerina off her feet
Heya creeper. It’s been a while. I wasn’t feeling too well but now I’m better ^^ I kinda like the title already 😊 (Also took a peek at the related ...
May 20 -
Re: अगर सब कुछ याद न रहता
I want it to be known that I tried getting so many other ppl to read this but alas, to no avail. While, here goes nothing, let's hope translation software ...
May 20 -
Re: Monster under the Bed
Heya ^^ Allow me to take a look at this poem of yours. It’s been in the Green Room for so long ☹ I like the personification of fear! It ...
May 20
