Tikaya

Good morning herb 😊 I wonder if the title is a reference to some ppl only praying when they have a real need. The curbside makes me think of two ...

Good afternoon! Ahh and I feel like I might be the opposite of the target audience for this^^° But hey, if it stays in the Green Room for this long, ...

Hia Shot! After coming from a bunch of poetry reviews, I’m plunging straight into a narrative with such a heavy topic! Let’s read! My first thought is that you are ...

Hia friendly potato :3 You won’t really find good poetry tips with me, just vibes =D That said I find that I am not that fond of the repetition of ...

I am even less versed in songs than in regular poetry but so far I loved all the lyrics you’ve written :3 I love the striking line of “trying to ...

Good morning canopy! As per usual, lots of likes, no reviews, so here I am. I like the title. I guess, the way fish sleep, they would see the surface ...

Ah I still had the old name of the poem in my list. I feel like Steam Engine kinda fits with the whole “too hot to run” theme, right? =D ...

Oh I at least like the self-awareness Tim display here, saying that all the things he does for protection are actually really scary to normal people. Oh I feel for ...

Ahh I recently read the other POV, I think? So let’s see if this can provide any new insights. Idk why but the narration here, despite calling things “heavy” between ...

Alrighty, let’s find out what was held! Already, I like the sentiment expressed in the first stanza. That just because something is over, unwilling, it doesn’t mean it didn’t leave ...

Ohh like basically fanfic, but for a song! I really like the first paragraph. I forgot the exact rhythm of the song but it was easy to read one into ...

Good morning :3 I think the first few verses of your poem read very well! I like how you establish the base line so efficiently! But what really caught my ...

Heya Alex! I somehow missed that this was your poem, still in the Green Room. And idk… Something about the way you described it and maybe also even the cover ...

Oh that is already a pretty cool starting line for your poem! I like how you immediately immerse us into the feeling of what it’s like to be a child ...

Hmm! I see an interesting format to your poem already! I do wonder what it means so let’s read it ~ Oh no, this feels as if something physical, something ...