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Re: Asking Andrea out
Hmmm I'm not sure why this is not in the Green Room despite having only 1 review? I would have never found this if you hadn't linked it in the ...
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Re: Someone wants to take Andrea to the dance?
Aww for once a feel good story. Cheers me up too! Will check out Carter's perspective, probably after this one. Though when it's one of your stories I'm starting to ...
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Re: Comforts of Hell
Hi hellow! Been on a roll today, once more so here's another review. You do have a lot of stories out here in the Green Room! I feel like I'm ...
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Re: Laughing Jack laments about he is portrayed, part one
First thing first, I think there might be a word missing in the title? I remember this Laughing Jack is one of Janice's parents, right? Getting a hang of the ...
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Re: Damon and Trista’s wedding
As far as introductory sentences go, this one certainly grabs attention! Makes me wonder if it's a good idea to invite her. Or maybe it's a 13th fairy type situation ...
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Re: What does Marcus want to do all his life?
Hey, for once I decided to review something that is NOT old! Hi creeper :) You're still not doing the dialgoue formatting correctly xd Here it should be like this: ...
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Re: The Last Spell 49
Ahhh immediately ominious since here's the Dante we've heard from in the last chapter @.@ It's strange to reconicile what we head of Dante last chapter with a line like ...
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Re: The Last Spell 48.2
Oh Mireya casually dropping that she's at least centuries old. I love that :) Although the pronoun issue persists. It feels either like you decided half-way through that you changed ...
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Re: The Last Spell 48.1
Ahhh the story is called the last spell and now the mystery person mentions a First Spell??? I believe there is a lot to this story and yet here i ...
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Re: Janice came up with a love poem for Valentine’s Day!
Not sure if that was the intention but I just chuckled at the line "so that I could start murdering like them." Just the imagine of "yeah yeah, enough learning ...
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Re: The Last Spell 47.2
In fact, I liked it so much that I immediately went to the other part of the chapter in the Green Room. Let's see what Katja has to say. I ...
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Re: The Last Spell 47.1
Now I have not read any of the other chapters so I come in here blind and ready to just focus on the writing. I learnt that it's quite fun ...
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Re: Many more five Richardson stories
First of all, I find it very nice to have a being that looks monstreous to be seen as a person. Even if he's too afraid of the other girls' ...
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Re: Garbage machina
I'm the first to admit that poems are not my strong forte. But I was very captivated by yours. It feels very gruesome and detailed, describing a harrowing medical procedure ...
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Re: Just Married
Oh it's a huge coincidence that Trish invents a man that happens to be related to her late husbands crimes! I wish this story weren't just dialogue. The supper arrived ...
Nov 11, 2025
