Tikaya

I read the wikipedia article of Virginia Woolf just recently. Thank you for sharing your poem about her! While poetry is not my usual style of fiction, I still really ...

I quite enjoyed the beginning part of the story. I felt like I could follow well along the MC's thoughts and it was easy to get invested. "I try to ...

I like the "spider-webbing her eyes with crimson lines" that sounds really poetic! In general it feels like you have a few really neat phrases in there, some nice bits ...