Tikaya

I am known to be merciful at times, so I shall heed your request! Hi hello! Here to once again try my hand at reviewing poetry. Must admit, it is ...

So since I loved your other story, I’m glad you also have this one in the Green Room. And what a first line to read =D Oh this is intriguing! ...

Ah I wish there was a bit more description of where Zachary is, like what the room looks like before we head into the argument. But I really, really like ...

XD there is a running gag in my friend circle that I never write down names I hear correctly and I never pronounce names I see written correctly either! So ...

Well then, it’s probably too late for any feedback to be relevant for school but this is in the Green Room so have my thoughts anyway ^^ I also have ...

Oh I really like that the man isn’t greedy, like I feared he would be with such cautionary tales and instead keeps thanking the girl. I also like that he ...

Hahaha, I remember how vicious seagulls can be. Let’s see what this poem about them holds. And I love how you portrayed them as these cheeky sandwich stealers bc that ...

Okay, leave it to poetry to teach me more obscure words like “brumal” or “febrile”. I feel like they fit very well into the poem :3 I don’t know what ...

Well that is certainly a shocking way to start the story. Alright, I am here for our disabled future protagonist! And oh no, immediately we see the consequences, poor guy ...

Hi Mei! I don’t really know what to make out of this character profile. So I guess I share some thoughts. I think a feminist that hates men is a ...

Hi hello, I have reached your work in the Green Room so you shall have my review 😊 I wonder why “sleepy hollow” isn’t capitalized. Isnt that a town name? ...

Hi Alex, this time I’m reviewing some of your actual writing =D Annnd we head straight into my favourite topic: dialogue formatting. Here we go: ”[…] Please make her feel ...

Ah… I don’t like this font at all. I think it’s one of my absolutely least favourite ones. I shall read this in text format. I love this image: “We ...

I really like that this wizard comes across as appropriately mysterious :3 Loved that he left a gift for the baby :3 Found a small typo: “I’ll give you to ...

Time to earn that fifth start 😊 Hi hello! I come with a review! Hm I wonder what you mean by “tried aggression”. And we’re heading right into the dialogue ...