So, Rhea Harmonia Skyris is a character in my upcoming fantasy book The Luxen Chronicles: Remnants, set in the fantasy world of Luxen. The Luxen Chronicles is (hopefully) going to be a book series made up of (currently) 3 books, Remnants, Reflections and Rebirth. I have a teaser on my Quotev for Remnants (The Luxen Chronicles: Remnants Teaser | Quotev). Here's Rhea's character profile!
Name: Rhea Harmonia Skyris
Nicknames: Ree, Harmony,
Gender: female
Sexuality: Lesbian
Age: 28
Inspiration: Lydia the Bard (Lydia the Bard - YouTube), Pike Trickfoot(Vox Machina), Allura Vysoren(Vox Machina), Kima of Vord(Vox Machina), Holga Kilgore(D&D Honour among thieves), Ramattra(Overwatch 2)
Likes: feminism, music, singing, explosions, Kamari Kelpora (another character), fighting, helping her friends,
Dislikes: Men, being treated differently, men flirting with her, Kamari being in danger,
Race: Air genasi
Class: Barbarian, Cleric and Bard
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Eye colour: greenish-blueish
Hair colour: almost white light blue
Outfit: white shirt with a dark blue vest-like corset, and she wears black trousers with a short dark skirt over the top, that is part of her corset
Background: Wayfarer
Languages: Common, Sylvan, Auran, Draconic
Pets/animal companions: none
So, that's that. But here's a picture of her made by copilot.
Anyway, I hope you enjoyed Rhea's profile, and I hope you look forward to seeing her in The Luxen Chronicles: Remnants!
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Hi Mei!
I don’t really know what to make out of this character profile. So I guess I share some thoughts. I think a feminist that hates men is a bit… generic. I rly hope she has more interesting quirks in your story.
I also find it sad that you used AI to create your character, especially if its for a book that you actually intent to publish.
There are some rough commas at the end of some of your bullet points, in need of purging 😊
So, I guess that concludes my thoughts on your character as you didn’t add any more details or questions 😊
Hi! Thanks for your thoughts! Just so you know, the commas were because I was going to add some more things to the lists, since the story (and characters) are still being developed. I'm also a bit upset about the AI image, I just am not the best at drawing things from my mind, I need a base image to work with, and I haven't got round to drawing her yet, and I just wanted to have some sort of image of her so everyone could see kind of what she looks like, so, sorry about that. Thank you again!
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I understand the sentiment about AI, it really is so useful @_@
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Top Graham Cracker - This is a character profile that introduces the audience to Rhea Harmonia Skyris, giving us more information on the protagonist and the world to come!
Slightly Burnt Marshmallow - I have no recommendations to make as of right now, since this is a character profile. You could make it into a forum if you wanted to. :>
Chocolate Bar - Rhea seems like an interesting character and a protagonist that I would root for. I love her design. ^v^ I think that the Luxen Chronicles sound pretty cool. I just don’t know if you’re going to publish it on this site, Quotev, or have it published in print, have it “officially published”. I’d like to read the story! I also like that you’ve inspired Rhea off of Lydia the Bard. I listen to some of her songs and she is the GOAT!
Closing Graham Cracker - Overall, a lovely character profile. I look forward to learning more about the other characters, especially Kamari, since she’s Rhea’s love interest. I also cannot wait to read the Luxen chronicles and I will check back to see if the stories are published. You know your character well! And so…
I wish you an amazing day/night! ^v^
Thank you! I appreciate it! I've hardly written any of it so far, but I am really looking forward to publishing it eventually, either online (like here, Quotev, Wattpad, etc) or as a printed book. I don't know when that will be, but I'm glad you are interested in reading it. Thank you again!
You%u2019re welcome! :>