Tigersprite

I was walking through the High Council, on my way to my office. When I was walking through my door I saw the queen. She was waiting for me. She ...

Inkheart. All the Harry Potter movies after the fourth. Eragon was a rubbish book, but the movie was worse. Percy Jackson, they tried to modernize and sexualize everything. Narnia movies, ...

For starters, My Shining Light. I don't think a word such as Shinning exists. 1" see ?", I asked quietly. 2 "Under the blossoming tree?" ,she shook her head. "I ...

I like the feel of the poem, a nostalgic sadness. It's something people can relate to, the almost family event of chatting while clothes are being hung outside. I'm not ...

As Mizzle pointed out, this is a tongue-twister, not poetry. And please try and follow the guideline while posting--Please use good grammar. Posting in caps is not good grammar. Next ...

Fix the title, it's a really incredibly long story but it is rather interesting. It's too long for me to review, because I'd have to read it twice and I ...

This is an incredibly powerful and well-written piece. The best part for me was the last stanza: Now I want to be healthy But I'm going to need some help ...

Good poem, I like the repetition: How could you? The only small nitpicks I have are in the third stanza: How could you? Create such hurtful lies And take away ...

I like this poem. I'm not sure what, but something made me want to read it and I wasn't disappointed. I also agree with the others, you could have added ...

Fantastic imagery, and you have a way with words. I did find it a bit sad, but not in a bad way. This is my favourite stanza: I am ashamed ...

Well, it ends in a depressing manner. But it's a good poem, I like some of your descriptions: From green drenched Sunshine Into a drunken haze of amber Anyway, well ...

Really, really strange poem. But rather good for your first time; it's completely abstract. That's one good thing about trying out poetry, you can be as weird as you want ...

I like this! I haven't quite figured out yet who the beautiful girl in the sky is, but I will! My favourite line is definitely: But he looks down And ...

This is one of the funniest poems I've read to date. However, it wouldn't make me go out with anyone, the girl really must have been a nerd. As stargazer9927 ...

Got down the everyday emotions of a labourious housewife to a T. I like how you play with the words, in a single poem you let us connect easily through ...