TiernanW

Oh my god, that is so flattering! :D Thank you so much.

Thank you for your help! :)

Interesting poem. I found the "flooding my happiness and drowning it" to be very cliché, but then you countered this with the idea of the mud smelling of fish and ...

Merci for the review! :) I do agree with your points.

I think it looks better capitalised, but I will take it into consideration with my next piece; it might just fit! :)

Thank you! :D Made me feel great.

I noticed the confusion between Hinduism and Buddhism but its only a joke guys. Relax. It could have been written better yes, but meh, I don't think this guy was ...

Much appreciated Rit :)

Thanks for the warm welcome! I will get to review your work soon.

Haha I did mean sex. :) The effect in making your wonder was a success then. Yes, the friend and the speaker were building to home base before it all ...

Thank you Tuesday for this kind review! :) Reading it, most of your nitpicks make sense.

Pleased to read your review! I have a bit of a thing for writing love/heartbreak poems haha, but I should try something new. :)

I had thought about changing those 2 lines you first mentioned, but I liked how it sounded. Though, I seem to be the only person who thinks that haha. Thanks ...

Twas rhythmic and emphasis, but it obviously didn't work as intended. :p Thanks for the review though! :)

Thanks for the review! :) I tried to create an emphasising effect with the commas which obviously didn't work out, but thanks!