Threnody

Edited, thanks. :D

Yes, I love cats. Don't get me wrong. This story was inspired by a poem that I read. I changed it a bunch, but the main idea remains the same. ...

Thanks everyone so much. I haven't gotten around to editing it yet, but when I do I'll definitely use some of your ideas. Sparrow>>>> He does not have an "irrational" ...

Edited. Courtesy of all of you. I am still attempting the second person. Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~ Forever Threnody

Yes, it is another take on the Pied Piper story.

Where I'm going with it, it's not going to stay cute. :D Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~ Forever Threnody P.S. You realize that it's based of the Pied Piper right?

Well, actually it seemed like I could add more detail and make it seem a bit more interesting using 2nd person. It was also sort of a challenge for myself ...

Mosterific~ You are very opinionated, did you realize that? And no offense but, "my heaven's cloud" is a cheesy line. I've been cut down so many times for my repetition... ...

This poem was purely metaphoric. Now think about what my bees and butterflies could be. Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~ Forever THrenody

Thanks for your input. I prefer not to use punctuation because I would like the reader the interpret it the way they would. Yes, repetition. That is the base of ...

Which one is that?

It's an awesome username. What's your problem?! Insulting my username openly and publicly. It's a bit ironic that you posted it on a poem about love and kindness! And look ...

Oh this was so cute and really funny! It had a great concept. I loved it a lot! Awesome job Snoink! I loved the characters, especially Addie. The whole thing ...

I know it's spelled "a lot." It was just a random thought I got when I was typing "a lot" That happens to me a lot. (There it is again! ...

Is it rap? It doesn't seem like rap. Rap would have a more consistent rhyme scheme and a more selective syllable pattern. If it's anything than it should be either ...