Threnody

Here you go~ A fire made without coal. Try adding "the" in-between "without" and "coal." It's all for the sake of a consistent rhythm. This dreadful, devil madness. I think ...

Hello. I've been much anticipating this. Here are my comments~ (They're in bold) “Hey James.” I heard and turned to see Zeke at the door. Zeke was my best friend. ...

Okay, one I've got to say that I absolutely adore your avatar. It's my favourite I've seen in a while. Hilarious. Great prologue. I loved it so much. It really ...

Oh my gosh Thien. I hadn't read this poem yet. This is so gross and childish. But amusing in a way. Wow. What horrible thoughts go through your head? This ...

WriteWatIWant! I haven't reviewed anything of yours yet. Well, here goes. Should I write a love poem Since it's Saint Valentine's day? Should I propose to dance or to sing ...

Tomorrow doesn't matter 'cause we are caught in endless time. Lies that we tried to scatter aren't worth more than a dime. Okay, the last line seemed quite forced and ...

Hello Voice Inside. Nice to meet you! On to your poem~ An innocent thought; a hope to dream Life is for living and creating a scene Each moment you’re singing, ...

This poem had such deep meaning. You wrote it with a lot of feeling. Here's just a few nitpicks. Carry me; I want you to carry me on. Take me ...

Very good poem. It was so deep and flowed wonderfully. Honestly, there was nothing I thought you should change. Don't mess with perfection, no? I loved how the syllables kept ...

Hey Ergo! Nice to meet you! Now onto your poem~ I thought this poem was very beautiful, and definitely not your average love/yearning poem. I loved that! You used very ...

Hello, nice to meet you Serendipity! Now, onto the poem. Meet her Sweetheart. Knocking on a bit, but keeping her company; A gammy leg and flat cap - An old ...

Hi! Nice to meet you! Here's my comments, (some editing is in bold) The moon is shimmering The only light in the darkness Pain surrounds the Earth Sand washes up ...

Straight onto the objective... the story. I liked it a lot. It carried on a nice story. Here's some comments~ The Story- Overall: Very fast paced even for a short ...

Hello, just so you know, I've never played Halo and I don't know anything about it. Now here's my review. a heavy footprint and heavy breathing Heavy breathing doesn't seem ...

Lovely poem. I think it captured a flight extremely well. Just a few comments in bold~ I took a trip today, A Journey above the clouds. Lumbering through the sky, ...