Thisislegacy

Thank you :)

I currently am seeking medical help and taking an antidepressant. :) thank you

Thank you:)

You're welcome. What I do for stanza breaks is use dash marks since the way the publishing center does something weird for stanza breaks. You can see what I mean ...

Thank you, I am still learning and I listen to French music a lot as well to help improve.

It's totally cool man. If you want any other ones critiqued just let me know :)

I rewrote it, is this what you were meaning to do.

I see it as a neutral name so that no matter if I dress masculine or feminine the name would still match :)

I'm also gender fluid. :) If you need a chat, I'm here.

I have the translation in the comments if you couldn't quite understand it. I like it better in French personally just because it wouldn't be understood without using google for ...

A TRANSLATION A small girl, turns sad all the things in her life She needs love. - A fake love, a broken home a sick mother - An absent father ...

I agree that French is prettier in its use than English but yeah I can see why people wouldn't try to write a review on it unless they knew some ...

I just noticed that you want my soul xD. Why?

I am still learning the language, I will show my French teacher this poem today and see if there's any grammar corrections that need to be made.

The interpretation of salope I thought was Bitch instead of slut. XD. Also I thought partie was the feminine version of partir in it's correct format but I must have ...