Thisislegacy

Okay.

Thanks for the review. I'll work on that.

Thank you for the review. I'm sorry you feel that way about the indents. I do realize that my wording is off. The second stanza is the speaker asking themselves. ...

I did not realize that there is a random apostrophe. I will fix that. I will also fix the dialogue. The second stanza is asking to themselves, sorry if the ...

Thanks.

Thank you.

You're welcome.

You're welcome.

The capitalization is for aesthetics, because everyone pays attention to the capital letters. The last line is an author's note. Hopefully the dash I edited in helps establish that. This ...

It's fine. I needed the review points anyways so I did a long review xD. Plus this does have potential to be great. I wrote it out so you could ...

I put this into satire because everyone at least once feels like they are ignored and I was trying to put it into perspective. Everyone demands attention, and everyone wanting ...

Thanks. Check out my other poems if you haven't already. It would be helpful, and I'll check out yours too.

Yeah the last line does seem awkward. Thanks for your review.

Thanks for the review.

Thanks for the review. Could you tell me where there is bad grammar so that I can fix it.