ThirdBetrayle

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Haha! It's okay :3 And your review does make sense. "The narrator him/herself is the one responsible for their own destruction and the people laughing know that." You recognized my ...

*DIES* xD

Haha! Thanks :p

O; Me? Tell the author what to cut? I wouldn't dare. It's your writing, love. Just read it over and areas where you feel the detail is too repetitive, confusing, ...

Ohhhhh! -facepalm- Wow. He he thanks for explaining it to me :p It was my pleasure to review this. But seriously though, keep writing :D

Haha! Thank you, Love!!!! Yes, my poem is referring to how this age is so prone to masking the pain that we feel inwardly to put on a show for ...

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Thank you so much for pointing these things out! I will edit this poem as soon as I BEAT YOU IN THIS REVIEW DAY!! hehe. Black for the win!!!! Have ...

Haha, thanks for being gentle :p "The stars won't let us touch the sky" is actually written wrong...I should probably fix that. It's supposed to be, "the stars won't let ...

o; Heading to the local library right now! :D Thanks for telling me o;

That's deep...

Hmm...that's the first. You never know. It could be me. I might be a God o; Jk, jk. But I do get a creeped out vibe from the first line ...

Thank you so much for reviewing my work!! I really appreciate it. I must say that many of the things I write are..."journal-like" in style. I tend to just write ...

Thank you!! And it's true. So much attention is focused on social media and I see girls posting pictures as if they are determined to impress the world yet provoke ...