ThienThienThien

Hi Aubree! :D I found this quite a humourous short story, but with many grammatical mistakes and problems. I'll just quickly correct it without any explanations as I'm sure you ...

Hi Ariana Valentine, and welcome to Young Writers Society! You're probably aware of the 2:1 ratio of posting work and reviewing work alreayd, so I won't go into that much ...

Hi Fire of Dawn! I was going to be your reviewer today, but there doesn't seem to be anything wrong with it! :D I was just wondering whether this was ...

Hi Marshmellow-Warrior! I'll be a reviewer for these poems and for you today! I'm going to reviewer the poems one at a time, so one in each comment I do, ...

Hi Claeren! I shall be your reviewer for today. I apologize for reviewing three days after you posted this essay :D I'm just going to edit it all for you! ...

Hi Nate.B, again, again! :D I'm going to be your reviewer once again, and hopefully a good one! I bought the chain with my eyes I like this line. The ...

Hi Nate.B :) It's me again! I'm here to review your poem! Here we go! :D The moment I read the first stanza, I knew I wouldn't be disappointed again! ...

Hi Nate.B! First of all, welcome to Young Writers Society! :) There's a ratio rule here on YWS: for every two posts, you must make one review. I'm sure you've ...

Hi, ASXZ, I shall be your second reviewer for today, and this shall be my second review on my account! :) First of all, I'd like to tell you that ...

Great Poem. I like the fact that the last word of each stanza is the beginning of another. Are you suggesting there is never an end to anything? Maybe not ...