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Thesky

Thesky

  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: I Don't Think

    TheSky/sky Its like it tells my life but onto your poetry Its telling alot of descriptun Nice story read through it agin

    May 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My first Haikus

    Hey this is Thesky or (Sky) In the first one "1.Dogs' Laugh..(the title) They barked and barked and when they laughed they laughed like us But I heard them bark" ...

    Feb 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Everything Inside

    Hello this is Thesky or for short Sky This was really good I liked how it was a lot of felling there isn't that much to figure out. You might ...

    Feb 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Go ahead and hurt me more (child abuse poem)

    This is really good it shows a lot and it shows how the children stick up for themselves.

    Feb 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Tips For Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 7: A Different Way of Saying Things

    Feb 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: For Lareine

    WOW, this really is great, Their is a few grammar errors but nothing you can't fix. This really shows your fellings and how you think. This is good poetry and ...

    Feb 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Be careful, my love

    It pulls peopel in just by reading the first sentence. You could add more describing words or read through the it to see what you can do but I think ...

    Feb 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Days of January Chapter Two

    I really have nothing to say. This was AMAZING and it's not me trying to be nice this was just amazing if this was a book I would totally fall ...

    Feb 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Days of January Chapter Two

    I really have nothing to say. This was AMAZING and it's not me trying to be nice this was just amazing if this was a book I would totally fall ...

    Feb 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: And It's Over

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    I really liked how you added a lot of description and meaning. It sounded like it was coming from somewhere I really liked how you added your fellings. It was ...

    Feb 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: And It's Over

    I really liked how you added a lot of description and meaning. It sounded like it was coming from somewhere I really liked how you added your fellings. It was ...

    Feb 11, 2016
  • Script » Realistic, General Re: The India Of my Dream

    I really thought this was good I'm in 6th grade but still i really like it.

    Feb 11, 2016


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