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Re: I Don't Think
TheSky/sky Its like it tells my life but onto your poetry Its telling alot of descriptun Nice story read through it agin
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Re: My first Haikus
Hey this is Thesky or (Sky) In the first one "1.Dogs' Laugh..(the title) They barked and barked and when they laughed they laughed like us But I heard them bark" ...
Feb 13, 2016 -
Re: Everything Inside
Hello this is Thesky or for short Sky This was really good I liked how it was a lot of felling there isn't that much to figure out. You might ...
Feb 11, 2016 -
Re: Go ahead and hurt me more (child abuse poem)
This is really good it shows a lot and it shows how the children stick up for themselves.
Feb 11, 2016 - Re: Tips For Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 7: A Different Way of Saying Things Feb 11, 2016
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Re: For Lareine
WOW, this really is great, Their is a few grammar errors but nothing you can't fix. This really shows your fellings and how you think. This is good poetry and ...
Feb 11, 2016 -
Re: Be careful, my love
It pulls peopel in just by reading the first sentence. You could add more describing words or read through the it to see what you can do but I think ...
Feb 11, 2016 -
Re: Days of January Chapter Two
I really have nothing to say. This was AMAZING and it's not me trying to be nice this was just amazing if this was a book I would totally fall ...
Feb 10, 2016 -
Re: Days of January Chapter Two
I really have nothing to say. This was AMAZING and it's not me trying to be nice this was just amazing if this was a book I would totally fall ...
Feb 10, 2016 -
Re: And It's Over
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Feb 10, 2016
I really liked how you added a lot of description and meaning. It sounded like it was coming from somewhere I really liked how you added your fellings. It was ... -
Re: And It's Over
I really liked how you added a lot of description and meaning. It sounded like it was coming from somewhere I really liked how you added your fellings. It was ...
Feb 10, 2016 -
Re: The India Of my Dream
I really thought this was good I'm in 6th grade but still i really like it.
Feb 10, 2016