Theodorable

Forever. Forever started in April, but the weather felt like May. We’re sixteen and we can plan our future and make our promises. Okay, I like how you started off ...

Oh my gosh!!! i loved it! It is so suspenseful, I was thinking he was going to dump her at one point, but he didn't. Everything in this is so ...

Okay, I LOVE this poem!!! Although I don't get the whole cold/mold thing. The rhyming thing does need a little more work, but overall this is a good start for ...

Hey! This is a really good poem, the contrast is there and I get it.(sometimes I don't) The hard decision before you is difficult and in trying to make a ...

Okay, well I need to know, is the relationship dead or is he dead? I'm not sure with how the ending goes. It has a relatable topic(because we all have ...

Aww. Please tell me if this is real or not. I have to know!!! Okay, down to business.(rolls up sleeves) This poem flows beautifully, I love how you rhym on ...

It sounds really good so far. I guess it just depends on what type of music your band is playing. So I don't know how it will sound. But from ...

Okay, this is a very sweet poem. You just need to watch out for the rhythm of the poem. It sort of gets off track near to end, so you ...

I would like some coffee I'd like it's macrame of smell to envelope my mind with it's gentle caramel Okay, this is a good opening. It involves our senses and ...

Okay, I loved the poem. It is a concept that I have not considered, so it got me thinking. That is the main point of a poem, to get others ...

your sweet face and slobbery kisses steal my heart, i loved you from the very start okay, um you need punctuation. the rhyme scheme needs a little work as well. ...

I see the darkness in you And I can't avoid thinking I'm responsible I've stained you. Ruined your thoughts, Killed your heart. This has great emotion, the opening ha already ...

Inside me there’s a knot of dread, Echoing softly in my head. It warns of the photos of me, Of the faces and places I used to see: If you ...

I don’t know if you’re familiar with the term “hypochondria” but I happen to live with it and his name is Gerard. He was five years older than me and ...

Well, um... is it going to continue? It seems like a prologue to a story. So if it is then great, but if not you might want to change it. ...