ThemagicalEbonyFox

Hello Steggy. Just stopping by for a quick review: "I didn't believe where I was." This sentence just didn't sit right with me. Maybe it's just the unfamiliar wording, but ...

Hello! I'm here for a review. The premise for this story is great, and it's got a lot of potential, but there are a few things that bugged me when ...

Review time: First of all, I loved it. The concept was great, I loved how you referenced the song, and overall flow of the writing was something I really liked. ...

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Hello there again Kai. After talking to Hein in the Character Interviews club, I decided to check this out. I loved the interaction and friendship between Hein and Washi and ...

Hello there again Kai. After talking to Hein in the Character Interviews club, I decided to check this out. I loved the interaction and friendship between Hein and Washi and ...

H there. I know this was posted a while ago, but I'd like to review it anyway. This was a very unique and interesting piece of work. Usually tales of ...

Hello there. To celebrate review day I've decided to stop by. I won't talk much about grammar because MissGangamash handled that in her review, but hopefully you'll find my comments ...

Hi there. I'm not that good with reviews yet, but I thought I'd stop by anyway. Let's get on with it: Bits I liked: "He was fifteen minutes late." I ...

First thought: This is like the food version of Toy Story! Other, more reasonable thoughts: This was a very gripping story. I'm glad you stopped it where you did, because ...

Hi there. Just stopping by for a quick review. First of all starting with "once upon a time" isn't the most creative or interesting way to start a story. The ...

Very touching and heartfelt. I'm sure we've all lost a family member or friend during our lifetime, and this does a great job of capturing the kind of feelings and ...

What time is it? It's review time: This seems like a very interesting concept, but I feel that some more context would be useful to understand what's going on. Trust ...

Hello there! Time for a review: I thought this story was an intriguing concept, combining classic mythical characters with modern humour. I found it difficult to grasp Jude's character, mainly ...

I'm new to this website, and this is the first piece of work I have had the pleasure of reading. I thought the language used was very descriptive, and I ...