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Oh, thank you for the review, and thanks for pointing out the italicized part. I was having a hard time remembering to italicize it. (I realized a flash fiction named ...

Thank you i really appreciate the review, and yeah you are correct i wanted to make the story longer, but my burst of confidence was slowly waiting so I had ...

Thanks for the riview. I will surly check them out they seems like fun read.

In the first bit, i would say then it felt more like a semi-tragic poem. Well, that's why i felt like i didn't have any knowledge on how to write ...

Thanks for the review, and if you like you could read the 2nd chapter. I really would love if you could review it.

Thank you for the review, and dont worry i want people to critique me like this so that i can grow more as an author. I loved the way you ...

Thank you for the review.

Wow you have big expectations i will try my best to meet them, and thank you for the dono

Oh if you want to know more you can read the prologue where i introduce my second mc. To find the prologue just look at your right and look at ...

Thank you for taking your time, and reviewing my work. I appreciate it.

Thank you for the review.

I wish that it was bigger, but still a concise good read.

Thank you, i really cannot express how much i appreciate this review. When i was Reviewing this to make sure it was good, i was very dissatisfied with my work, ...

i loved your review thanks for taking some of your time to review this work. I genuinely appreciate it. Thank you