TheWalkinDude

Wow. Simply, wow. I feel like I can connect with this, as does everybody else who has commented, and I really feel you nailed a lot of the key points ...

I gotta say, nice job. This is a very nice story to get one in the mood for Christmas and it's written very well. I do understand that two others ...

Hahah! Must say, good show! I really like this story and think it's a very good one shot. Of course, there are problems here and there, but it would seem ...

The Cold Quietly rising, through your body. Freezing your muscles, numbing, painful. You’re powerless. The feeling is sickening, but, you’ve felt it before. Waiting to lose this never won battle, ...

Okay, first off, I like the vagueness of this poem, and it's brevity. Very mysterioso, I would say. But, I will say it still has it's problems. The main problem ...

Thinking knowledge is a good thing is right, thinking you know more than anyone is wrong, I say this because poor me was too ignorant at the time to recognize ...

And then he did the most wonderfully heartbreaking thing. I didn't really like this opening sentence. I would suggest maybe changing it, though not starting on an "And" next time. ...

My sweet , he whispered in my ear Fingers on my temples bare Good enough to eat , he’ll leer And run his hands throughout my hair. Your skin as ...

I feel it. The eyes of society I like this just because I've always had this kind of thought that society was like a living, breathing person, the eyes being ...

In all honesty, this was rather harsh towards the masses of men. Of course, I did like some of the arguments (mostly because I'm more girl than boy anymore), especially ...

Wow, man, this is some pretty radical stuff you got goin'. Must say, though, pretty impressive. I like how you approached everything, despite it being a joke, so scientifically. It's ...

... Give me a moment to compose myself... Egh-erm... This is quite simply the BEST thing I have ever read on YWS. I loved this! Mostly because I couldn't stop ...

I'm a little confused on this: Is he flying to fight the evil? Or is he thinking about evil while flying? Or is he just having a deep thought while ...

First question: Is this a prologue? Second: If so, will there be more? I thought this was a really cute short story or story cut. Especially the little vixen part. ...

This poem reminds me sitting in the family room with my family, me off to the side, them on the couch, watching T.V., talking, laughing, with me still to the ...