TheWalkinDude

Honestly, there's not much I can say about this poem, having not seen the movie myself, so as far as whether things make sense, I can't say much. I can, ...

Her arms were bruised, her legs scraped and bleeding. Burns marked her wrists, from the course ropes wrapped tightly around her. In truth I think these four lines need work. ...

Well, as far as being a poet, I may be the closest the reviews this piece. I'm no Emily Dickinson or nothin, but hey, let's give it a whirl. My ...

Spider Web. sadness is slowly suffocating me pensively rapping it’s delicate fingers around my neck -intricately, calculatedly…quickly. death has become my new lover I like the contradicting feeli

Again, I have clicked on one of these trending subjected pieces, and unlike the others, I find this one to have no way of attacking any person or people or ...

Howdy, Eraqio! I'm gonna review your poem for you today. First off, great job with this. In the back of my mind I felt that this was just another cliche ...

Cool poem, dude. I really like things written as if Death's talking. It's something that has been written about a lot, sure, but it still has that sort of mystery ...

Aww, man, this hits my heart. I'm probably the biggest dog person ever, and I mean ever. I love dogs and dogs love me, and I mean really love me. ...

I'm a bit confused; is this about a love that's almost like a love-hate relationship? Or is this about feeling pain in love? I do like this and although I ...

Hmm, well, this is certainly an interesting poem. I really like those poems where it seems as if the writer wrote it with some meaning that is hidden behind the ...

Dude *hugs* I love you! I must say I'm totally drawn by this poem! I'm a big military person and I love reading stories and poems of war and all ...

Howdy! Noticed that you had edited your poem, so I thought I'd go over it some and see if there are any other problems. First: I want to say that ...

Hehe, wow, very cute indeed! So far this is the second poem like this that I've read on YWS and I'm glad to see that the second one is so ...

Howdy, Dreamer! I'm glad to here that you're planning on being a vet tech! I love animals a lot and I have a deep respect in my heart for the ...

One thing I noticed that everyone else reviewing this seemed to miss: this is for a flash-fiction! Honestly, if this is just for something that's going on between two characters ...