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Wow, I like this. A lot. I never understood why people love summer better than winter, it's so much quieter, eerie and calm. I guess I have to like it ...

Hey EchoSong! First, I want to say this little bit, no matter how tiny it was, picked at my curiosity. The plot doesn't describe anything really... maybe less is more? ...

Whoa! You got me addicted here :D But unfortunately, I have to say it too... Perfect! I love, love, love this. The grammar was pretty good. I only saw some ...

Hey JDawn! Beautiful story :) It makes me think of the mornings when I wake with this warm feeling and just want to pretend I never woke up. Sometimes I ...

Hey Forgotpzwrd! The story itself has potential. You could definitely do something great with it! Maybe tweak with it a bit but the idea is pretty good :) I like ...

Hey Rascalover! The poem is really beautiful. I quite enjoyed it :) The words are well chosen and you describe really well what love is! We need it to survive ...

The poem really isn't bad, it's actually pretty good. You use good words to express the feelings, and like some mentioned above, the imagery was pretty good. I can imagine ...

Hey! I'm here again to review :) My lungs are burning, but I don’t dare open my mouth. His words have me stumped, and I take a moment to look ...

Hey CharlotteGrace, First off, I thought the beginning with all the descriptions was a good idea, it gives us a bit of a backup to what's coming. The plot is ...

Whoa okay. First, I've got to say that i loved it! Beautiful words. The imagery is really good and in the first verse, I can almost feel like I'm in ...

Hey you! First off, I'm sure you already know I like the plot :) It's cliche but has something special. It has potential! I've only got a few things... I ...

Hi TPak! First off, I think the plot is very interesting. It's something quite different and you've written just enough on the synopsis so we, the readers, don't really know ...

Hi thegilliangill, I don't know who Martyn Waghorn either but I don't think it really matters, except it does make the context more difficult for me to understand. It is ...

So far, I love the idea. The plot is pretty nice and in only the first chapter, I've got a pretty good view of the situation of the characters and, ...

Hi! Reading the description, I'm going to be honest, I wasn't totally sure I would like it. A rebel teenager, sent away for the summer to live a life changing ...