TheTruthLiesWithin

Hello there :) I'm Truth and I'll be your reviewer for the evening. First off with the nitpicks... She walked around aimlessly circled the room, looking for something to read ...

Hey there! I'll start with the nitpicks and finish up with the pleasant part :) We headed down to the club, me wincing every step, trying to figure out how ...

Hello there Winie :) Stooping, I rinsed my dirty hands in the short sink, feeling the droplets sink into my skin, cleansing it. Water doesn't really get absorbed by our ...

Hey Deadenedpulse :) Truth here for a quick review! Comments in bold, suggestions in red :) Once again my friend, W e find ourselves walking along our forgotten memories , ...

Hello Andysgirl :) I'm Truth and I'll review your post tonight. First off with the nitpicks That’s when she remembered the foreign man outside the door on the other side ...

Heyy Dread Father's greeting. Dread Father's blessing. We welcome you to our home. Our ranks are secret, S acred as we descend in to darkness As we To willfully leave ...

Hey Pink :) I see you've post on the forum haha. Well I am glad :) She 's gotten into a car accident and she’s pregnant,” she says with a ...

Hey there :) I'll make this short; corrections I suggest in red and comments in bold. Covered faces ; can't tell who is who. Impossible expressions you can not read. ...

Hey there :) I'm Truth and I'll be reviewing this chapter tonight. I'll start with the least pleasant.. Nitpicks: The door swung open and Annie’s smile dropped , and brown ...

Hey PaperCrane :) Nice poem here, it's really interresting. I love that it's different and, like you said, defies the rules of classic peotry. Below, I've put my suggestions in ...

Hello Kiki :) I'll review your poem for you. I thought our friendship was strong But I was all wrong I'm still young To understand what true friendship Really means. ...

Hey Wicked :) I love this piece, it's really flowy and awesome. I'll start with some things in noticed. “You may call my ‘my Lady’,” Allegra continued, “please, sit down.” ...

Hey Lauryn! So I'll review this poem of yours with my comments in bold and changes I suggest in red :) How many times can I look into your eyes ...

Hey Dreams :) Your title, as simple as it is, drew me in. I'll do a quick review, my comments will be in bold and changes I suggest in red. ...

Hey Shary! First off, welcome to YWS! Hope you like it here :) Now, for my review, I'll start with some nitpicks then move on with my overall review for ...