TheSybarite

Thank you so much for your lovely comments! :) Also, thanks for the follow. :) :D

Hey! I was actually thinking about Romeo and Juliet when I wrote this. I am happy the influence shows! The tragedy associated with love that couldn't reach its happy ending ...

Hey! I was actually thinking about Romeo and Juliet when I wrote this. I am happy the influence shows! The tragedy associated with love that couldn't reach its happy ending ...

Now that I think of it, yeah, I could have used some more metaphors. I see your point. It would have elevated the poem, no doubt. Some brainstorming is up ...

ok..I have no idea how the review showed up thrice! I am really sorry for it, though :(

Beautiful thought behind the poem. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there. But apart from that, it is a good one. The theme and the idea is developed ...

Really good. I do agree with everyone that it kind of conveys the idea of ungratefulness rather than naivety. But all in all, it is a good one. Cheers!

Hey! First of all, thank you for your great comments. This is one of my first attempts at poetry, so this response is overwhelming :) Secondly, I really appreciate the ...

Thank you :)

Thank you for your lovely comments. I really appreciate it. Oh, and don't worry- I am fairly content and happy in my life. Not at all suicidal :) It is ...

Sure...'Happiness' poem coming up soon

I was really scared about the reviews I'd be getting for it. Honestly, I never expected such great comments. Thanks a ton!

thanks :)

thanks :)