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  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: a title?

    Thank you for reading! In the original poem, the phrase "mine stands still" was written in cursive. YWS won't let me do that. Also, my punctuation is purposely crappy to ...

    Feb 1, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: a title?

    Thank you for reading it! I didn't capitalize the "i" on purpose. I appreciate your analysis of my poem, though!

    Feb 1, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Loss of Pulse

    I never noticed that the one bit rhymed! Thank you for reading!

    Jan 14, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: All Words Are Empty Words

    Thank you for reading! I was clueless to what the title should be, so the one there now is just a filler.

    Jan 7, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: All Words Are Empty Words

    Thank you for reading! I couldn't think of a title, so this one was kind of a placeholder... I'll try to fix it ASAP.

    Jan 7, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: All Words Are Empty Words

    Thank you for reading!

    Jan 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Realistic Re: Infinite Potential (Chapter One) - Tuesday, December 27, 1:00 AM

    Thank you for reading!

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Realistic Re: Infinite Potential (Chapter One) - Tuesday, December 27, 1:00 AM

    Thank you for reading it!

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Realistic Re: Infinite Potential (Chapter One) - Tuesday, December 27, 1:00 AM

    Thank you for reviewing! I realize now how many typos I made!

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Relativity

    Thank you for reading it!

    Dec 26, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Relativity

    Last time, I got in trouble for including the one curse word. I didn't think I'd risk it this time! Thank you so much for reading!

    Dec 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Lady Lilith

    I wouldn't have posted the poem if I didn't want feedback. Thank you for reading!

    Aug 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Lady Lilith

    Thank you for reading! I'm happy with any review you have time for.

    Aug 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Lady Lilith

    Thank you for reading it!

    Aug 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Science Fiction Re: Basecode: Chapter Two

    Thank you for reviewing. Most of the lines were typos that I will be sure to fix in the near future!

    Sep 29, 2015


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— Ernest Hemingway