TheShauzer

Don't mean to put you down, I know you have real feelings about racism :) Just trying to help you get them out more clearly.

Thanks Star ;) Yep, it was meant to end at 'moon' :)

Thanks RC :)

Thanks RC :)

I was tempted to review but said "Nah, that'd be ridiculous..." :'D Happy birthday YWS!

I'm not being insensitive, if you don't write for reviews don't upload. It's as simple as that. I gave my opinion on how to make it better, you're having a ...

Learn how to take criticism, I don't care about your beliefs I care about writing - no offence.

Sorry if I bashed you I just didn't understand the piece ;)

Really? I've never heard it before :')

Good luck with future poetry!

Thanks live :) Yes I'm not really a fan of haikus either, just wrote these three out of boredom, but then I asked my Mam what she thought, and she ...

Haha :)

Thanks sushi :) if you like the dark genre you should take at my works quarantined and the dare :) short stories. Thanks for the suggestions, I didn't know people ...

Thank you! The numbers were to save me from YWS's formatting :)

:)