TheRebel2007

Thanks for the review, Seirre! :p

Hey there fructose, thanks for the review! I don't know why the rhyming feels forced to you, each line of the entire poem has six syllables, except for the first ...

Hey there, thanks for the review, Lizzy! Well, as I said to Lee in their review, "ad" is a Latin word which means "to" or "till". I guess the problems ...

Thanks for the review, Lee! The "and" is actually required, as it means that the butterflies rest on the half-dead bark, not the saplings. I think I should add a ...

Thanks for the review, Lee! Firstly, "Free Will and Free Thought" represent one idea, and therefore, I have used "is" instead of "are". Secondly, "ad" is a Latin word, which ...

Thanks for the review, D! :p

Thanks for the review, AriesBookworm! :p

I do not exactly get what you meant to say, but thanks for the review! :D

Thanks for the review, vampricone! :D

Edit: I divided the poem into stanzas, it already had stanzas before, but the gaps were erased for some unknown reason

Actually, this was divided into stanzas but when I uploaded it on phone, I don't know why but the spaces were gone. "Made better little, life people's," basically means "I ...

The first line that you refer to, refers to Brutus and Cassius - who conspirated to kill Caesar and to some extent, Labienus too who left Caesar to fight against ...

Thanks for the review StellarJay! :p

Thank you for the review, vampricone! :p

Thank you for the review, Malice! :p